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See the Daffodils

see the daffodils 
fill my garden with colour - -
birds peck frozen ground

for Charles' contest

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Michelle Smith

Date: 5/28/2024 1:24:00 PM

One of those enjoyable moments that makes you thankful to be alive... I know that kind... your heart almost stops, awestruck, and you think... this is so ordinary, but I'll never forget it! But we might, so we have to document it properly, in a poem :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 9:36:00 PM

I sure like this one on seeing it again. Do you know of any poems of yours I have missed? Well, back is wanting me off so off I go now. MAybe to work on a poem in my nice comfy bed!

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/25/2012 1:09:00 PM

Oh, this is a lovely one!!! daffodils are itself so poetic always, you've created a beautiful visual here. Congrats Jack on your superb win in this haiku contest....

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/25/2012 10:21:00 AM

Nice haiku, Jack. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2012 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations Jack on your win.Very nice haiku.Enjoyed the read.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2012 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' Haiku contest Jack. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2012 11:30:00 PM

a real dleight, jack.. congrats on your fine win :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2012 8:56:00 PM

Yours had some really great juxtaposition in it, Jack. Congratulations.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/23/2012 6:02:00 PM

betterer and betterer! Tadadadahaaaa haiku! How ya doing over there in jolly ole? Congrad's Light & Love

Charles Henderson

Date: 2/23/2012 5:52:00 PM

Jack, thank you for entering my haiku contest. It was a better contest because of your poem.

Judy Ball

Date: 2/20/2012 10:20:00 AM

Nicely done Jack. Really good imagery here. PS Thanks so much for your comment on Ode To Benjamin Franklin. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/19/2012 10:55:00 PM

Wow, this is a great one! Clearly divided in two parts and wonderful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. I think you've got a winner. Rhonda :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 7:22:00 PM

Yes, THIS is how it is done, Jack!! Good luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2012 6:15:00 PM

Great one..That is what is happening here this year..I don't know but it feels like it might be freezing here in the morning.Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/19/2012 4:34:00 PM

My favorite flower...mine are blooming like mad..nicely done. Bg