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See how the rain

See how the rain oils the dehydrated skin and heal the excruciating pain of the starving mother earth see how it brings long waited for salvation to the malnourished fauna and flora see how it brings life to the dead yet patient rivers having waited for so long under the hot burning merciless sun see how the rain fills people with hope joy and excitement and washes away their fears drowning them in water filled rivers see then how the land is dressed in colors captivating to the eyes and how the air is heavy with pungent aromas and sweet with melodic songs of birds caressing the skies ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ featured poem on PoetrySoup.com home page from the 21st to 27th February 2011 8th position on ''Razzle Dazzle'' contest sponsored by Linda-Marie

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Date: 11/6/2017 8:52:00 AM
Wow, another powerful write, Bojosi. Hugs eve ~`*
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Date: 1/6/2017 9:57:00 AM
See how it rains See how she reigns, Beautiful art Bojosi
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Date: 11/25/2013 11:48:00 PM
Bojosi, Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:05:00 PM
A visual masterpiece Bojosi, congratulations on your win ;)
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest, Bojosi
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Bojosi. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:33:00 AM
Beautiful poem, and like all things the rain is double edged sword, It can heal and it can destroy. Wonderful writing. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:42:00 PM
Congrats Bojosi on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your support always..winners list is now posted to view..
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Date: 3/11/2011 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on going through the first round..Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Bojosi. Love Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:11:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Bojosi. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:03:00 PM
ever had your skin cleansed in a storm of acid rain?
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Date: 3/25/2010 10:52:00 AM
Wow! the joys of water :) Tumelo
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Date: 3/22/2010 12:53:00 AM
Good job and really good poem keep up the work
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:36:00 AM
Beautiful and captures the power of rain.
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:53:00 AM
anyone who has experienced a drought will understand the blessing of long awaited rain. the sweet refreshing gift of it.... beautiful work....Margaret
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Date: 1/31/2010 11:22:00 AM
Some folks look upon rain as a sad reminder of dreary days, but I like your acknowledgement that rain is necessary to proote life. Great ode to the restorative powers of rain! Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:51:00 PM
Very good, rain washes away a lot and gives so much,,,good write..thanks on You Can Run,yes God is the glory...thanks Danny
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:46:00 PM
What a beautiful, truly beautiful write, Bojosi! Great imagery! And I can smell the sweet odor from the soil after the rain!! Pure delight! my favs.! Peace and love, Audrey And thank you for your kind comments on my poems!
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:11:00 PM
Beautifully written lines. Great topic on which to write. Keep the creative lines flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/29/2010 11:55:00 AM
Water is very spiritual, healing... I enjoyed your poem very much.. and thanks for your comment on my poem The Birthday Party, very much appreciated...
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:57:00 AM
What a pretty line: of birds caressing the sky!! I think you are seeing many nature poems here today because of that new wildflower contest and also the spring haiku contest that is going on here. Nice to meet you. enjoyed your poem and your comment to me! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:05:00 AM
wonderful, makes me want to get a drink! lol
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:54:00 AM
From rain comes life, loved this, made me feel good Daniel
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