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See Ahead

Intensely ahead My eyes see beyond this world To a far off place One planet cracked and broken Flung from its normal orbit Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2012 10:04:00 PM

Cool one, russell. Sci fi-ish.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2012 9:08:00 PM

Russell, wonderful image... well.sort of..lol, thank you for the lovely poem, I had much fun and thought reading your poem tonight*LUV~PD

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/27/2012 9:38:00 AM

I think you nailed in the head Rusty; We certainly could use some healing on this one. Great verse and done with so few words! Luv, Elizabeth :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2012 9:27:00 AM

a visual masterpiece Russell especially my eyes see beyond this world.. expressive and makes u a visionary as well as a poet ..luv.. immensely profound words..

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2012 5:50:00 AM

I think this world of ours is like a beautiful blue marble that has suddenly been heated and dropped in cold water. Nice job here Russell. Love the imagery. God Bless, JB

Ian D. Campbell

Date: 3/27/2012 5:44:00 AM

Short but yet powerful.

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/27/2012 4:43:00 AM

Nice Tanka....