Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Seductive Melody - As Captures Me -

Icy water flowing
   from the mountain rivers
   Heard a song of the wind
   A song that touches
   Thaw the snow from the past year
   Will get the sun to glow
   Is there angels sang

   My attention drew me close
   The wind and cold - my senses are open
   The melody is grabbing it catches me
   Just standing there and looking up at the sky
   The joy and awareness - enjoy the moment
   Let go of the breath
   The wind song or angels song
   It brings peace to my inner

   Alone with the mighty mountain
   The feeling being free - a freedom without links
   Life is all about crossing boundaries
   Feel the blood freezing as mountain water in your veins
   In joy and humility
   Song of the wind - listen
   Dance with life and angels




   27.06.2014
   A-L Andresen :)
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Donna Jones August 8, 2014 at 5:47 PM There is certainly nothing better than enjoying the moment especially in nature..what a lovely write dear Anne Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2014 at 5:17 AM - Pleased you liked it, dear Donna :) - Thank you, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Deidre Hansen August 6, 2014 at 9:23 PM Lovely write, I enjoyed reading! Deidrexx Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2014 at 4:41 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Deidre. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 2, 2014 at 6:34 PM your writing breathes free. Reminds me of when I lived in the Smoky Mountains. Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 5:41 AM - Pleased you liked it, JSL !! - Thank you, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jim Carpenter July 21, 2014 at 9:31 PM Brings a chill even in the middle of this sultry summer here in the southern US... Nicely penned.. Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2014 at 3:40 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Keith Robson July 20, 2014 at 9:15 AM This is quite a special poem Anne-Lise, I write quite a few Angel poems myself, your poetry is really lovely...Keith. Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2014 at 12:45 PM - Thank you Keith, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Ferguson July 17, 2014 at 6:04 AM you make life feel so beautiful , Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2014 at 2:00 PM - Thank you Cynthia, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Glenn Johnson July 15, 2014 at 11:24 AM Anne Lise Thoroughly enjoy your use of aspects of nature to ground the spirituality of this poem. With second thought, all of your poems I have read. Glenn Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2014 at 12:11 PM - Thank you Glenn, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton July 5, 2014 at 6:22 PM such vivid imagery in your words Anne Lise this poem is a wow hugs Anne-Lise Andresen July 6, 2014 at 3:34 AM - Thank you Shadow, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak July 5, 2014 at 6:16 AM The song of the mountains is beautiful and haunting. It has always called to me. Anne-Lise Andresen July 5, 2014 at 7:25 AM - Thank you Monterey, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus July 4, 2014 at 4:38 AM Beautiful and serene melody that captures the heart. Lovely imagery....reminds me of Song of Norway (saw it 42 years ago!) Have a nice weekend, Anne Lise! // paul Anne-Lise Andresen July 5, 2014 at 5:43 AM - Amazing that you can remember so long back .... (I'm not good at remembering the year far back ) - // A-L :)) Paul Callus July 4, 2014 at 2:37 PM Yes, it is a movie; saw it in England ca 1972/3. Anne-Lise Andresen July 4, 2014 at 8:33 AM - A movie (?) .... - Thank you Paul, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop July 2, 2014 at 4:53 PM This poem sprinkled serenity and harmony upon my heart dear Annelise. Anne-Lise Andresen July 3, 2014 at 3:27 AM - Thank you Charmaine, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven July 2, 2014 at 8:48 AM The freedom of the mountains. Love the wild places, enjoyed your writing about them. Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2014 at 8:50 AM - Thank you Scott, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Shi July 2, 2014 at 7:12 AM Very nice write, it captures ones imagination ?? Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2014 at 8:08 AM - Thank you Poet Shi, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George July 2, 2014 at 5:33 AM I have a tuned wind chime outside my kitchen. It plays such angelic melodies just for me every time the wind blows. Lovely writing. Anne Lise. Thank you for sharing. bfn Elaine Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2014 at 6:01 AM - I have some "wind chimes" in my garden (Hanging in the trees) .... beautiful to listen to :) - Thank you Elaine, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath July 1, 2014 at 1:56 PM "Life is all about......angles", beautifully captured in the body. Genius, loved the poem. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2014 at 1:59 PM - Thank you dear friend bl, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler June 30, 2014 at 9:11 PM Nature's beauty and the songs of the wind always bring to me so much peace and comfort. I feel so relaxed and refreshed after reading your beautiful words. A wonderful write, Anne-Lise! :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2014 at 3:28 AM - Thank you Kelly, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn June 30, 2014 at 6:16 PM Love the nature and the lovly part about the icy water and mountain streams line the best and not just because it's hooter than all get out here lol Love your imagery in this beautiful write, Happy Fourth of July to you also lady glad you enjoyed my Little miss libery poem it is about my grand daughter Ivy, she is my firer craker, cheri Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2014 at 3:27 AM - Thank you Cherl, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Datu June 30, 2014 at 12:51 PM So warm and peaceful, I get your vibes, Anne. You bring me joy-- thank you! Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2014 at 1:04 PM - Thank you Leon, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo June 30, 2014 at 12:43 PM This was very pleasant to read It touches the soul and makes you feel the peace. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2014 at 12:46 PM - Thank you Lucilla, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud June 29, 2014 at 3:17 PM this sizzles in a most charming way, anne.. such a fine write dancing with life and angels.. best of sunday!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2014 at 2:26 AM - Thank you Nette, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chandrasekar Singaram June 29, 2014 at 11:48 AM Wonderful ! really enjoyed reading every bit of it :) - Sekar Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2014 at 11:56 AM - Thank you Sekar, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick June 29, 2014 at 6:48 AM This is one of your best works..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the sharing it with us..Have a great day..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2014 at 6:52 AM - Thank you Sara, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Williams June 29, 2014 at 3:26 AM Anne Lise this is a wonderful write, it flows perfectly...hope you are both well..David Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2014 at 3:53 AM - Thank you David, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - Pleasant to see you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Nehls June 28, 2014 at 9:01 PM Wow, this is so totally wonderful. I can hear the angels, Anne Lise, they are singing our song from the tops of those mountains. Very well done, my friend.... Robert. Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2014 at 3:52 AM - Thank you Robert, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jon Arno June 28, 2014 at 8:40 PM Wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing this with us. Best regards, Jon Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2014 at 3:51 AM - Thank you Jon, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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