Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Seductive Little Thought

i want to be 
the inspiration
of thoughts 

kissed
by whispers
of your lips
unspoken 

be caressed
by your fingers
as they trace 
the edges
of curves

be laid upon 
sheets of white
seductively 

move
in rhythmic 
pulses

be the cause
of your breathless 
sighs 

then linger
in your afterthought 
like a memory

sincerely 
your next
poem

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Krish Radhakrishna November 27, 2019 at 1:36 PM Clever again. Playing on people’s predictive thinking. Sandra Adams November 27, 2019 at 1:59 PM Thank you so much Krish :)

Curtis Moorman November 22, 2019 at 1:41 PM Okay! You got me! I have read all the responses and can only say DITTO! Sandra Adams November 27, 2019 at 1:58 PM lol thanks Curtis....word play can be fun sometimes... :)

Regina Mcintosh November 22, 2019 at 5:37 AM Love it - as usual. You're amazing. Bless you dear friend, Love, Gina Sandra Adams November 27, 2019 at 1:58 PM thank you so much... hugs

Andrea Dietrich November 21, 2019 at 8:31 PM love love love it. FAVE Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 9:02 PM wow,,,, thank you so much...especially for the fave... hugs

Joseph May November 21, 2019 at 6:16 PM The ending was a sweet surprise..Great write Sandra.. Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 6:41 PM Thank you so much Joseph... glad you liked the ending :) hugs

Vijay Pandit November 21, 2019 at 3:13 PM Definitely seductive--you have limitless inspiration my friend --and your next poem knows it--cleverly depicted. Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 6:40 PM thank you so much my kind friend... this one came out of nowhere fairly quickly... hugs :)

John Hamilton November 21, 2019 at 3:11 PM A very intriguing poem with a twist at the end, fascinating write showing the progression of thoughts as if subconscious thoughts were dictating or suggesting to the conscious mind what to write, enjoyed! Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 6:39 PM Thank you John, my midday bus scribbles are usually nature inspired, but you can only write about wind and leaves so many times...i wanted something different this one came very quickly... hugs :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 21, 2019 at 3:07 PM Wooing the muse, I love it. Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 6:38 PM Thank you so much Maureen.... hugs

Bobby May November 21, 2019 at 2:55 PM You did it again, I have to stop reading your poetry it's to good!! Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 6:37 PM lol Bobby...don't stop reading... thank you for the compliment my friend... hugs

Chris Green November 21, 2019 at 2:12 PM Breathless, speechless and endless, the awe I have for your poetic words and thoughts. Seductively enchanting as if a dream sighed through an open window on a summer eve. Absolutely beautiful. Sandra Adams November 21, 2019 at 2:33 PM Your comment in itself is beautiful sigh ... I know not my usual bus scribbles but you run out of things to say about leaves after awhile when every day scenery seems the same :). Thank you so much my friend. You made me smile ... hugs