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Seduction of Surreal Show

Slowly sinks the setting sun silently spent and sore Still soul of horizon sips its shine from the serene sea Satin sands smoothly strewn on the sloping shore Surround the shimmering silver shells I stand to see. Streaks of scarlet cloud sail in the seamless sky shallow Sea-surface soaks their shades the slant sun rays spatter Surging swells split on the sparkling swirls in surreal show Seducing me to swing in sync with the salsa spins of water. December 17, 2020 Contest : Alliteration Sponsor : Eve Roper

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Date: 6/14/2021 7:36:00 AM
Dear Subimal, I love this "seduction of alliteration." Good job! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/25/2020 3:11:00 PM
I can say a group of s words without getting all stammered up. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 12/23/2020 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement. I love the S sounds, they're very soothing.
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Date: 12/22/2020 9:48:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 12/22/2020 7:50:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/17/2020 10:28:00 AM
This is a beautiful alliteration. Descriptive. Best wishes in the contest.. ~ Ani
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