Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Alliteration

Seduction of Surreal Show

Slowly sinks the setting sun silently spent and sore
Still soul of horizon sips its shine from the serene sea
Satin sands smoothly strewn on the sloping shore 
Surround the shimmering silver shells I stand to see.

Streaks of scarlet cloud sail in the seamless sky shallow
Sea-surface soaks their shades the slant sun rays spatter 
Surging swells split on the sparkling swirls in surreal show 
Seducing me to swing in sync with the salsa spins of water.

December 17, 2020
Contest : Alliteration
Sponsor : Eve Roper

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Sara Kendrick December 25, 2020 at 3:11 PM I can say a group of s words without getting all stammered up. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Jo Chamberlain December 23, 2020 at 1:47 AM Congratulations on your winning placement. I love the S sounds, they're very soothing.

Beata Agustin December 22, 2020 at 9:48 PM Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Eve Roper December 22, 2020 at 7:50 PM Subimal, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve

Anitha Jayasankar December 17, 2020 at 10:28 AM This is a beautiful alliteration. Descriptive. Best wishes in the contest.. ~ Ani