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Seduction

Glitter, glisten 'neath still waters running deep; she attracts the unsuspecting, lures the impressionable to their doom. Slick and quick you never see her coming, her subtle magic permeates your soul and you're imprisoned, you've relinquished your control.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/15/2009 12:12:00 PM
Hmmmm....sounds like me~ he hehe...:) I like this one, Adding to my favorites...Good impressionable foresight! NICE WORK! Beautifully conjured and executed. Sexy and Seductive ! You've got such a talent for keeping things simple and yet you burst off the page with your choices of words and executions! I am impressed friend...take care ! :) janers
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Date: 3/15/2009 9:46:00 AM
I can picture a Venus fly trap or a spider on a web just waiting for their prey when I read this. Very good write Keith
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Date: 3/15/2009 8:37:00 AM
Sounds like a couple of old black & white movies I've seen, "Postman Always Rings Twice" or "Double Indemnity" Gotta watch out for those kind of women...double trouble!!
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Date: 3/15/2009 2:50:00 AM
She sounds dangerous. :) before you know it - your hers. lovely feel to this, moving, pushing the reader forward, love, Kristin
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Date: 3/14/2009 9:58:00 PM
How well you describe the seductive power of the opposite sex (women can feel this way about men, too)! See your Soup Mail, Keith. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2009 8:58:00 PM
Yes indeed, that is just how it works! You express the depth of temptation here and of your soul. So much truth in this piece. I love the line "her subtle magic permeates your soul" wow! Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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