Seducing Melody

Aromatic lingering scents Shadowed dancing from candlelights Touches of scattered roses Stings tickling the senses On the dim cool lights He held her slowly On her narrow waist He circled his arms He led her on the floor As music rises Filling the room He swayed her harmoniously Eye-to-eye, they behold a gaze Hands locked for support Hips and lips graceful With each hug and kiss Uniting with the rhythm Whispers one can audibly hear Movements conjoined Matching all push and pull Even glides and circles Breathing becoming ragged Exploration up for a crescendo Arms clutched as feelings rises up Temperature fires up, boiling fast Heartbeats thundering rush Clamoring for a liberated climax Then it explodes rigorously Unstoppable beyond reproach Time cease and freeze Sighing.. Reviving deep Plunging with the moment's bliss...
by: olive_eloisa 4:34pm revised: May 06, 2014 Sponsor Kim Morrison Contest Name Just Write 2nd place ------///--------********

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Date: 9/23/2014 3:22:00 PM
My kinda romantic writes, with passion and bite. Nor have I enjoyed romantic dances, to leave two in trances, entwined like ivy branches. Oo to live such words. Delightful piece Olive, James :)
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Date: 9/24/2014 6:03:00 AM
Thanks much James..:)
Date: 6/13/2014 9:45:00 AM
Olive, my friend, this is a trip to the moon. A fine piece on seduction. Congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/17/2014 12:13:00 PM
:) thanks.. :D
Date: 6/12/2014 10:38:00 AM
Olive.. Wow! Glad I wasn't in a crowd when I read this one!... Didn't know I still blush.. Congrats on your great win.. Arlene..
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Date: 6/17/2014 12:11:00 PM
:D thank you Arlene such a blushy beautiful comment.. :)
Date: 6/9/2014 10:11:00 AM
ANOTHER NICE WIN...PD
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:32:00 AM
Thanks Saba..:)
Date: 6/7/2014 7:10:00 PM
A love dance that sends one into a love trance! My friend, your light here shines like the Sun on a hot ,hot DAY!!! BBBBBBRAVOOO!!!!!!
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:30:00 AM
Hahaha yes..:D!! I watched a movie when I made this..:D and fell in love with a scene that I made this..:)
Date: 6/7/2014 2:28:00 PM
What a great masterpiece Olive ! Loved this one ,,, extremely melodious ,, congrats on huge win !
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:30:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma my pleasure to read your comments..:)
Date: 6/7/2014 11:17:00 AM
Very well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Joyce..:) GBU
Date: 6/7/2014 10:52:00 AM
wOWOWOW, and you placed very high with it too. I think only four main winners are even on the list. BIG congrats. I think this is your BEST work. A fave.
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:27:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...:) making it a fave is one big surprise..:) GBU
Date: 6/7/2014 9:21:00 AM
Wonderful win... Skat
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:24:00 AM
Thank you Skat gbu
Date: 6/7/2014 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Just Write, olive
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:21:00 AM
Date: 6/7/2014 5:57:00 AM
Very lovely piece of work here!
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:23:00 AM
Thank you Kim..:) I really appreciate you giving me a place in your contest..:) it was a great honor..:)
Date: 4/20/2014 1:41:00 PM
Wow Olive_eloi :) such a seductive slow dance....loved how it evolved from start to explosive end. that's a 7 rating for you. Haven't had one of those dances for years !! // paul
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Date: 6/8/2014 2:05:00 AM
Hahahaha Dearie PAul Thanks Much.. :) let's dance and dance.. :D
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:20:00 PM
That was such a shame! Congratulations on your excellent win! Can I have the next dance? :))
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/20/2014 4:00:00 PM
hahahha Paul.. like I am.. Nobody have invited me for a dance before.. :O even in our prom no one have invited me for a dance..
Date: 11/8/2013 1:37:00 PM
- A romantic and seductive poem, beautifully Olive ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:22:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise..:) GBU
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