Seducing Melody

Aromatic lingering scents Shadowed dancing from candlelights Touches of scattered roses Stings tickling the senses On the dim cool lights He held her slowly On her narrow waist He circled his arms He led her on the floor As music rises Filling the room He swayed her harmoniously Eye-to-eye, they behold a gaze Hands locked for support Hips and lips graceful With each hug and kiss Uniting with the rhythm Whispers one can audibly hear Movements conjoined Matching all push and pull Even glides and circles Breathing becoming ragged Exploration up for a crescendo Arms clutched as feelings rises up Temperature fires up, boiling fast Heartbeats thundering rush Clamoring for a liberated climax Then it explodes rigorously Unstoppable beyond reproach Time cease and freeze Sighing.. Reviving deep Plunging with the moment's bliss...
by: olive_eloisa 4:34pm revised: May 06, 2014 Sponsor Kim Morrison Contest Name Just Write 2nd place ------///--------********
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Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:22 PM
My kinda romantic writes, with passion and bite. Nor have I enjoyed romantic dances, to leave two in trances, entwined like ivy branches. Oo to live such words. Delightful piece Olive, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 6:03 AM
Thanks much James..:)
Chutani Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Olive, my friend, this is a trip to the moon. A fine piece on seduction. Congrats for the win. Mohan
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 12:13 PM
:) thanks.. :D
Smith Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Olive.. Wow! Glad I wasn't in a crowd when I read this one!... Didn't know I still blush.. Congrats on your great win.. Arlene..
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 12:11 PM
:D thank you Arlene such a blushy beautiful comment.. :)
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 10:11 AM
ANOTHER NICE WIN...PD
Khan Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Congratulations on your win :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:32 AM
Thanks Saba..:)
Lindley Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 7:10 PM
A love dance that sends one into a love trance! My friend, your light here shines like the Sun on a hot ,hot DAY!!! BBBBBBRAVOOO!!!!!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Hahaha yes..:D!! I watched a movie when I made this..:D and fell in love with a scene that I made this..:)
A. Sharma Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 2:28 PM
What a great masterpiece Olive ! Loved this one ,,, extremely melodious ,, congrats on huge win !
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:30 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma my pleasure to read your comments..:)
Johnson Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Very well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:28 AM
Thank you Joyce..:) GBU
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:52 AM
wOWOWOW, and you placed very high with it too. I think only four main winners are even on the list. BIG congrats. I think this is your BEST work. A fave.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:27 AM
Thank you Andrea...:) making it a fave is one big surprise..:) GBU
A  Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 9:21 AM
Wonderful win... Skat
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:24 AM
Thank you Skat gbu
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Just Write, olive
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:21 AM
Morrison Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Very lovely piece of work here!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:23 AM
Thank you Kim..:) I really appreciate you giving me a place in your contest..:) it was a great honor..:)
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Wow Olive_eloi :) such a seductive slow dance....loved how it evolved from start to explosive end. that's a 7 rating for you. Haven't had one of those dances for years !! // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Hahahaha Dearie PAul Thanks Much.. :) let's dance and dance.. :D
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 4:20 PM
That was such a shame! Congratulations on your excellent win! Can I have the next dance? :))
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 4:00 PM
hahahha Paul.. like I am.. Nobody have invited me for a dance before.. :O even in our prom no one have invited me for a dance..
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 1:37 PM
- A romantic and seductive poem, beautifully Olive ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:22 AM
Thanks Anne Lise..:) GBU
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