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Today I find yesterday's essence still tarries within my mind I try and wrap myself in thoughts of you to regain warmth from November's wind the trees are less blushed than I as they stand naked from this weathered touch I feel you in a winded breath like a tongued whisper against bare flesh the lake mirrors my reflection as I smile back through its ripples as if fingered by the soft caress of your hands I can see the sun paint passion's red across the sky I get lost in the depths of you within mind and climax between the folds of this day
11/19/2013

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Date: 2/21/2020 1:56:00 PM
Sandra, this one is sensual yet understated. I love your use of nature in describing these intimate thoughts: the naked trees, the winded breath, the lake's ripples, the sun painting passion on the sky. Pure mastery ~ congrats!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 10:03:00 PM
thank you so much John, my muse seems to love nature as a metaphor :)
Date: 2/20/2020 5:58:00 PM
Stunning Sandra, and deserving of your First Placement! Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 2/20/2020 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Connie...one of my favorite sensual writes of mine... hugs and blessings... XoXo
Date: 2/20/2020 4:12:00 PM
Wow, now this is one I wish I had read in 2013 and then again right now. Sensual beauty at its finest. Absolutely gorgeous my friend. Congrats on the contest win.
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Date: 2/20/2020 7:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris...it was for a contest...I can't remember if the host gave words to use or not...but one of my more sensual writes for sure... hugs
Date: 2/21/2016 3:10:00 PM
I was not sure what to find after reading the title, but I was struck by the flowing softness and mellow feelings; of course, it hinges its beauty on the romantic, sensual and seductive; lovely content, with a stress on the final stanza. #7 ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/11/2013 9:55:00 AM
wow.. Sandra..love it.. Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:15:00 PM
sandy, aren't you glad now that you entered this one. A MOST well deserved win, my friend. Congrats to you.
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Date: 12/8/2013 11:17:00 AM
Beautiful! Just enough directness to be, well, enough. Congratulations on your win... Jack
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:56:00 AM
Wow! This is a very beautiful & passionate poem my dear friend Sandra. Thank u so much for sharing & my big hearty congratulations on your awesome win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/7/2013 7:22:00 PM
very seductive poem congrats Sandra fine pen Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/7/2013 7:16:00 PM
Wow...congratulations on this awesome win
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Date: 12/7/2013 5:58:00 PM
congrats on a great win Sandra
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Date: 12/7/2013 5:38:00 PM
A flawless and scattered trail of images like a fingers tracery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2013 5:21:00 PM
flawlessly written and subtly sensual, building beautifully to those last three lines - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Date: 11/22/2013 4:23:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Some lovely poesia romantica here Sandra.. Ken
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2013 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Ken...sometimes my muse finds the romantic side...
Date: 11/22/2013 10:06:00 AM
softly seductive leaving me wanting to seek the peak of my senses..a most dazzling,luscious melody,sandra...huggdj
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2013 4:24:00 PM
thank you Nette :)
Date: 11/21/2013 10:21:00 AM
Are you entering this one in the erotica contest? You should it is subtle and still explicit in a delicious way.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/22/2013 5:25:00 PM
Good for you, I think it will do very well.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/21/2013 8:35:00 PM
Thank you Richard, and notice I made sure all the "i's" were caps...lol... and yeah i did enter it :)
Date: 11/20/2013 6:48:00 PM
- A beauty of great heights. . . real "class" Sandra !! (7) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2013 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...sometimes my muse finds the beauty... hugs :)
Date: 11/20/2013 1:53:00 PM
subtle sensuality dripping in soft flames of desire, sandra... lovely work, yesss!..:) huggs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2013 8:32:00 PM
thank you so much Nette :) hugs
Date: 11/20/2013 10:12:00 AM
beautiful poem Sandra...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2013 8:30:00 PM
thank you Joseph :)
Date: 11/20/2013 7:13:00 AM
very beautifully crafted piece
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2013 8:30:00 PM
thank you Liam :)
Date: 11/20/2013 12:30:00 AM
Mesmerizing and seductive. Part of me is glad it ended when it did, but a bigger part of me wishes it had carried on a little longer.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2013 8:29:00 PM
well thank you Mark...it had to end after it climaxed... actually when my muse first started with it, it ended sooner, then I came back to it a little later in the day and reworked a few lines and it grew a little... :)
Date: 11/19/2013 9:06:00 PM
wowowow, Sandy. I think you have written several I have not seen lately? This is SO GOOD. Is it for the seductive contest? What I like about your poetry is that the lines are the perfect length for free verse. I do not enjoy long lines (like I sometimes use in free verse) I admire how you can do them just the right way!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2013 8:26:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...I penned it from inspiration and wasn't sure about entering it or not...I may since it seems fitting...hugs :)

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