Barbara Gorelick Poet Sedoka

Sedoku Contest- the Porch Light

The Porch Light


It was always on
Until we were home at night
Only mother turned it out

Now my mother gone
But I remember the light
And what love is all about

1/4/16

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Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2016 at 9:13 PM barbara, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Andrea Dietrich January 19, 2016 at 4:04 PM tHIS was one of the very best ones. I remember it so well. Congrats in the contest.

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 10:45 AM BARBARA, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

Beautiful Scars January 18, 2016 at 10:30 AM Barbara, congrats on your placement in my contest and many thanks for your support *smiles* -luloo

Sara Kendrick January 12, 2016 at 12:44 PM Enjoyed reading your memory..Congrats on your recognition as premium member..Gave that to myself as a Christmas present.Sara

David Fisher January 11, 2016 at 5:13 PM Very nice and touching, Barbara.

White Sage January 5, 2016 at 3:35 PM wow! clever write Barbara Barbara Gorelick January 5, 2016 at 4:07 PM Thank you so much....Appreciate your kind words. BG

Viv Wigley January 5, 2016 at 7:48 AM What a wonderful, warm memory, well encapsulated. Lovely, Barbara. Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 5, 2016 at 2:20 AM Wow lovely Barbara.. best wishes!

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2016 at 3:29 PM Oh YES< now there is a first love poem for ya too!! Awesome little sedoka!!

Skat A January 4, 2016 at 11:00 AM nice