Security

Since that day, I find ways to cope, behaviours and rituals to repeat, the actions that help me sleep. Before I go to bed I have to check that the door is locked, the door is locked. The door is locked. I know that if I don't check it I will be okay, the world will not end, no-one will come in, I am safe. Yet, every night I still have to check. The door is locked, the door is locked, the door is locked. It's funny the effect a person's actions can have on another. Before the thoughts clouded your mind, before you bowed to them, I could fall asleep without the sound of the TV, I could lower the lights, I could dream, without the nightmares filling my head. But now when I fall asleep, I check the door is locked. It's locked. It's locked.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/30/2017 12:21:00 PM

I know someone like that, only this person is worse. He checks doors,windows, goes to bed,gets up and check them all over again.

Darren White

Date: 4/14/2017 12:16:00 AM

I think I understand what this is about, and that makes the repetition of your lines even more poignant.... A 7 from me, and welcome to PoetrySoup with this well written first poem!

Darren White
Date: 4/14/2017 3:21:00 AM

It's an almost OCD ritual, of which I am not sure of course, but that's what it feels like. Also it is a thing I still want to do, to keep demons of my past out that liked to creep in.....

Hannah Smith
Date: 4/14/2017 2:16:00 AM

Thank you very much. I'd be interested to hear your interpretation

Poetprentice Dupins

Date: 4/13/2017 12:45:00 PM

I had to make this a fav! This is a really neat poem and the repetition was the best part to me. I could hear one repeating that phrase, "The door is locked, the door is locked, the door is locked." 7+

Hannah Smith
Date: 4/13/2017 5:06:00 PM

Thank you so much!!!!