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Consider the palm Standing alone on the beach.... What it saw last night © Jul 11 2010 For Linda’s "Tropical Treasures" contest

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Date: 7/12/2010 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:14:00 PM
Congrats on the 10th place win, Charles
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Date: 7/11/2010 2:07:00 PM
A nice haiku aout the palm"s viewpoint. It's not tellin. congratulations on being in the winner's circle. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2010 1:08:00 PM
Oooh, just what did it see? Great, provocative haiku, Charles. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:25:00 PM
Very cool write. Interesting point of view, I really like this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:41:00 AM
Intersting perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Tropical Treasures contest. Keep that pen flowing. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:13:00 AM
This is excellent Charles, Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:05:00 AM
I really like how you presented this haiku, Charles. A great thinking one! congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:20:00 AM
Congrats Charles on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this clandestine Haiku which I thoroughly enjoyed .. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. with luv... good luck with the Grook contest ..
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Date: 7/10/2010 10:10:00 PM
Charles, don't that palm have loads to whisper about? Hehe, enjoyed it, best wishes for the contest, rgds Wilma
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