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Painting by Viktoria Laptiva titled "Playful Mood"

 

Secrets that She Keeps
hidden deep within are secrets that she keeps, as playful thoughts begin that make her passions leap. tender thoughts of him are roaming through her mind; these musings less than prim that blossom unconfined. dreaming of his touch, the warmth of his embrace while held tight in his clutch, her hands upon his face. longing for his love, and hearing tender sighs while gazing from above into his soft brown eyes. ardent are these dreams but never can they be; his love is pledged it seems, alas, his heart’s not free. tempted with this sin her smile an impish tease ‘cause hidden deep within are playful fantasies.
April 28, 2020

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Date: 9/3/2020 8:43:00 AM
Without wanting to sound embarrassingly fan like. I read your poems thinking a few at least must be fillers, but each and everyone is so good. Did you start off crap like me and then get better? Or have you always, been this good?
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/3/2020 10:35:00 AM
Wow, I now have a fan club... :) My writing has improved much since I started three years ago. Check your soup mail. John
Date: 6/2/2020 12:52:00 AM
It takes you into the story and keeps you wanting to know how it ends. Very nice.
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2020 4:45:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts and comments, Sheri, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I will let you fill in your own ending. Hugs, John
Date: 5/20/2020 2:15:00 PM
Picture and poem are of divine synergy John. I love this romantic poem and congratulate you on your win! xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/20/2020 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, this painting is by an artist friend of mine and when I saw it I just had to put my thoughts with it. All my best to you. Hugs, John
Date: 5/12/2020 2:49:00 PM
Hello John Gondolf, I feel sad for him because he can not have her in his life. He feels a strong love for her that will never be. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/12/2020 5:52:00 PM
Hello john Gondoll, your welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/12/2020 3:09:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you for sharing your thoughts. I hope you have a wonderful afternoon. John
Date: 5/11/2020 10:34:00 AM
Enjoyed this one John, I see it did well in the contest, well done!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/11/2020 4:38:00 PM
Thanks, John, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/11/2020 10:05:00 AM
What a beauty, playful fantasies, but 'alas, his heart's not free' - such a clever write - I loved it, worthy of a top win in the contest! Blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/11/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank you for sharing you thoughts, Jenn, I'm glad you enjoyed this playful little piece. Hugs, John
Date: 5/8/2020 2:21:00 AM
Exponential Beauty Enjoying Bravo Your First Place
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/8/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thanks, Gideon, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/1/2020 10:14:00 AM
John, excellent writing, I loved your poem and congratulations on your great win in Brian's contest _Constance
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/1/2020 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, I appreciate your kind words. Stay safe my friend. Hugs, John
Date: 5/1/2020 5:00:00 AM
Sam, what a playful rhyming flirtation. So well crafted, certainly worthy of the high award. You're more of a romantic than I thought!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/1/2020 9:39:00 AM
Thanks, Greg, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 4/30/2020 9:02:00 PM
So playful and flirty, John. Your vibrant imagery carries the inner life of your main character. I love your nod to respect of an existing relationship. Congratulations on your top win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/1/2020 9:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam, I appreciate you thoughts and comments. Stay safe. John
Date: 4/28/2020 10:20:00 PM
Oh my! Your words wrap around this painting- perfectly. The emotions within, are felt deeply. This is beautiful, breathtaking and tender, all at the same time. I wish to place this in my favorites. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/30/2020 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Brandy, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Sometimes the fantasies can be very playful. Thanks for the fave. Hugs, John
Date: 4/28/2020 6:32:00 PM
Well done...an enjoyable read
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/28/2020 7:33:00 PM
Thanks, Arturo, glad you enjoyed it.

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