Secrets

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Hiding and deceiving weighs on the human spirit. Thanks for reading this haiku.

Secrets weigh heavy betrayal and deception burden of choice

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James Inman

Date: 6/28/2020 1:13:00 AM

Very clever and thoughtfully written, Susan.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/1/2015 4:20:00 PM

This is written with much sense, Susan. Secrets are always a burden, even the 'good' ones are! Well done. // paul

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/2/2015 1:34:00 AM

Why thank you Paul! I appreciate your kind words and compliment. Take care.

Skat A

Date: 11/28/2015 10:32:00 PM

Susan, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/29/2015 11:36:00 PM

Thanks SKAT!! Wasn't expecting that so made my day. I'm honored. Take care, again thanks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/24/2015 8:06:00 AM

For this one I feel the first haiku is so impactful I would have it stand alone. It's my favorite Haiku so far.

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/26/2015 8:21:00 PM

And so it will. Thank you Richard for reading my poems, for the advice and compliments.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/23/2015 10:04:00 AM

Good haiku homily. Congrats, daver

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/26/2015 8:22:00 PM

Thanks daver for reading and for very nice comment.