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Written on March 9, 2025

I choose to dwell in the clouds contest

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On a quiet moment, as the sea touched the shore with gentle colors of hope, promises intent to offer the sun who seeks to end heart’s grief on a silent thought, as the scent of pine and moss covered the edges of a dancing forest where trees would embrace the soul with grace on a mist from the mountain’s high, reflecting peace lost amid the sense of heaven’s sigh belonging to the light who will forever abide on the music, playing like a dream who warms the night falling over the earth, dew drenched autumn smiles gentling the songs of a stillness who restores the spirit on the dawn’s breath, where winter silences the story bruising the colors of a rainbow murmur, intimate as the beauty of a life who knows the muse will flow on the poet’s anxious pen, words are famished souls resting on the edge of a note, guitar string’s rhythm trembling like a prayer who is breathing its pleading on a still life, beneath the soundless roar, so discreet blowing like leaves who dance with the serenity pouring from autumn’s graceful wind, pulsing praise on the clinging light of a prayer, fading quietly restoring the soul’s hope for heaven’s home beautiful peace overcomes the noise of defeat on the lingering city street, a few tendrils of light fade across the pavement, defeated by shadows who reveal the heart’s need for everlasting, belief on the twilight tales, where life is the color of grace there comes a feeling, bleeding peace and faith soothing away the darkness with the holiness of love on the air, a sensation of wonder, arriving softly resting amid the petals of rose and lily, fading so that we can see, beyond the grief, the potential on my way to the church pew, arising in my soul the melody of a cross edged in truth a cross who tells me I’m loved by God Himself I’m loved and I can see – this love is the reason I will always be filled with the best of intentions because He forgives me for being the worst sinner He forgives me for the sin that lives within me, seeking to destroy me with its secret – the sly, stealthy subtle depravity, that dark sin that silences the hope within, that leaves me feeling doomed by the enemy who overwhelms me with memories of the life I’ve lived, the sins that have plagued me, again and again, the doubts that leave me hesitant to believe the One who saves has truly saved me! Oh, dear Jesus, I’m so very grateful!!!

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Date: 3/15/2025 10:18:00 PM
congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/15/2025 11:38:00 AM
You're always so good with any theme and you generally manage to tie in a spiritual sub theme which is really cool. Congrats
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