Get Your Premium Membership

Secret Sin

God wants the church as a bride To walk closer by His side There's many at odds All wearing facades Yet, God knows what hearts may hide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/25/2010 8:33:00 PM
GREAT win. Congratulations@
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2010 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations Virginia on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2010 5:09:00 AM
Congrats on your first place. Great job. You and yours have a good weekend. Rgds, Ralph
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 9:56:00 PM
Congratulations Virginia. Your title threw me just a little, but your message didn't. I owe you a membership with Poetrysoup.Send me your mailing address or I will buy your membership on line. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 7:01:00 AM
This is an excellently and perfectly written Limerick poem, Virginia, and a very timely and expressive one as well. It isn't often one gets to see the perfect syllable count in a Limerick poem. Carl.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2010 6:24:00 AM
Great write Virginia filled with truth - tc Wilma Ps: Thank you for your comment on "that day my whacky words dried up" :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2010 7:01:00 PM
A wonderful entry in Limerick. Good luck in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2010 7:53:00 AM
Amen my friend! I like the reverence flowing through this limerick poem. It speaks to reality. Great job! Joseph
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2010 7:40:00 AM
Great Write....Thanks for your comment and help with the typo......Larry
Login to Reply