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Secret Sin

God wants the church as a bride
To walk closer by His side
There's many at odds
All wearing facades
Yet, God knows what hearts may hide

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Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2010 at 8:33 PM

GREAT win. Congratulations@

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 25, 2010 at 11:17 AM

Congratulations Virginia on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

June 25, 2010 at 5:09 AM

Congrats on your first place. Great job. You and yours have a good weekend. Rgds, Ralph

Joyce Johnson

June 24, 2010 at 11:08 PM

Congratulations on your first place win.Joyce

John Freeman

June 24, 2010 at 9:56 PM

Congratulations Virginia. Your title threw me just a little, but your message didn't. I owe you a membership with Poetrysoup.Send me your mailing address or I will buy your membership on line. Agape, Moses

Carl Harris

June 24, 2010 at 7:01 AM

This is an excellently and perfectly written Limerick poem, Virginia, and a very timely and expressive one as well. It isn't often one gets to see the perfect syllable count in a Limerick poem. Carl.