Secret Sin

God wants the church as a bride
To walk closer by His side
There's many at odds
All wearing facades
Yet, God knows what hearts may hide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/25/2010 8:33:00 PM
GREAT win. Congratulations@
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Date: 6/25/2010 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations Virginia on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2010 5:09:00 AM
Congrats on your first place. Great job. You and yours have a good weekend. Rgds, Ralph
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.Joyce
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Date: 6/24/2010 9:56:00 PM
Congratulations Virginia. Your title threw me just a little, but your message didn't. I owe you a membership with Poetrysoup.Send me your mailing address or I will buy your membership on line. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/24/2010 7:01:00 AM
This is an excellently and perfectly written Limerick poem, Virginia, and a very timely and expressive one as well. It isn't often one gets to see the perfect syllable count in a Limerick poem. Carl.
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Date: 6/23/2010 6:24:00 AM
Great write Virginia filled with truth - tc Wilma Ps: Thank you for your comment on "that day my whacky words dried up" :)
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:01:00 PM
A wonderful entry in Limerick. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:53:00 AM
Amen my friend! I like the reverence flowing through this limerick poem. It speaks to reality. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:40:00 AM
Great Write....Thanks for your comment and help with the typo......Larry
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