Secret of My Desire

Quote: "From deep within my heart I always catch the scent of my Beloved. How can I help but follow that fragrance?" By Rumi She, an inhale of perfume on a summer day vacant as the scent of rain when she passes by, every flower mutes and bows to her aerial adventure truth be told she is the secret of my desire and she drives me quite insane when she dances the world stands still witnessing our private indenture she is the compote of my sweet thoughts, the reason I believe in love Her aroma a signature of passion, an undescriptive calling to my senses when she sachets my way every star of heaven releases light from up above she disarms me with her smile and disarms all my defenses a bouquet of wild flowers in the garden of my dreams , a fantasy of love she is the H in my big heart and the T of my tomorrows From deep within my heart I catch the scent of my favorite flower she is my best loved poem and sensation, she's my girl power. July 15, 2022 Sponsor Sotto Poet Contest Name Rhyme Rumi Quote
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Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Creative writing for the contest. Way to go. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" story/write. A bouquet of wild flowers is so beautiful just like this write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 12:04 AM
I enjoyed your wonderful metaphors Vie. “ a bouquet of wild flowers in the garden of my dreams , a fantasy of love she is the H in my big heart and the T of my tomorrows ”. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Raven Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 1:00 PM
Hi Vienna, this is such a wonderful song that stirs the senses with its beauty. This is a peaceful, joyous piece of poetic grace that I would expect to come from your golden pen. I wish you well in the contest. A gentle song to stir the soul. Hugs always ..... Mike.
Goff Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 4:49 AM
Agree with comments below Mystic! Whimsical journey!
Ashley Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 11:10 PM
Dear Rose, your beautiful romantic imagery captures the tender spirit of Rumi’s quote with poetic finesse. Simply splendid, my friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Baker Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 3:35 PM
Very romantic and sensual, Rose. I smell a winner. Bill
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 5:47 AM
Following the fragrance of our beloved is such a lovely expression, Vienna! It is not always easy to express yourself from a male point of view, but you have done an excellent job, my friend! ~ Warm regards /x/ paul
Roper Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 5:39 AM
The feeling and scent of your words are delicious, good luck my friend
DiMino Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 5:20 AM
"she is the H in my big heart and the T of my tomorrows" Jumps out at me, outstanding! Love the ending as well. Great read throughout! Thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 12:49 AM
I almost can catch the fragrance of your poem. So elegant. Hugs.
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