Secret Night

To SAW, Jr.
As a young wife with young faith, I innocently shared – cared and loved husband as my naivety best declared. Then his true, young-self broke, I groped and we choked. Now, lost and unsure, my soul is searching for stroke.
Amidst club music and noise, I saw you seeing me; a man so beautiful, perfecting my perfection fantasy. Your smooth approach ruffled my prim poise, your man-boy grin, hinted sensual, joyous joys. I completely lost my grip staring at your sculptured lips. Your amber eyes, long dark hair and lush eyelashes gave me intense, lust filled, intoxicating flashes. Yes, take me, please, to privacy if your perception matches. I don’t care where you go to church, if you hail from the north or south. I don’t need to know how you get by, if you’re a tinker, ruffian or spy. I just want our souls to fly as we escape convention, eye to eye, and, united, leave life’s real cries to flee high on swelling sighs. Let’s not talk of life’s mysteries or share our histories, but let us own the now, take it for you and me somehow. In the morning, disappear, but tonight stay intimately near. My heart won’t let you in, but soul yielding coats my skin.
This night shall be the one secret in my life’s pocket. From time to time, when alone, I shall tenderly unlock it and revisit senses felt this night, a soul memory gift where my private can relive our young escape lift.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/16/2017 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations, CayCay!
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Date: 12/14/2017 4:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win CayCay
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Date: 12/13/2017 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, CayCay! Janice
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Date: 10/5/2016 7:23:00 AM
Love the amazing flow...CayCay the rhyme is amazing also. This poem may be my fave I've ever read of yours... Congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:16:00 PM
CayCay, this one haunted me, calling me back to reinvestigate its depth and sorrow. Those sad "secrets" that gnaw at us seeking freedom from themselves. The stanza breaks and shift to italics beautifully set the "discussion" apart. thanks for dropping this one in the contest
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/4/2016 7:41:00 PM
Thank you, John, for taking the time and effort to sponsor the contest. I always appreciate the chance to cast light on an older poem because, really, none of mine on Soup are all that old so much as swallowed when new ones get posted. Also, I enjoyed reading your comments, thank you. Thanks for dropping by ... CayCay
Date: 7/10/2016 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations CayCay. .skat
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Date: 6/27/2016 6:49:00 PM
Sounds like a really hot fantasy. Raw sexual craving! Does fat, bald and old do anything for you? LOL
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/27/2016 8:07:00 PM
Yes, but I won't tell you what. LOL back, come on ... grin. So enjoyed reading your words tonight. I did miss your humor. I'm tired now, but I've made a mental note to visit your work soon (my mental notes are often erased while I sleep, but I do sincerely mean to try.) All the best ... CayCay
Date: 6/27/2016 9:41:00 AM
WOW, woman. I loved this. :) Unlock an cherish... life passes by so quickly. Loved the internal rhymes. Passion is glorified and rightly so. Hugs
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/27/2016 9:52:00 AM
Said the queen of sensual - quite an honor for me and I thrill when I get a 'WOW.' Thank you, Sweetie - thank you very much ... CayCay
Date: 6/27/2016 8:13:00 AM
Woo wooo I wish it was for real CayCay - wow what a wonderful imagination you have my friend:-) hugs Jan xx7
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/27/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Sweetheart. I have enough imagination for many lives! So good to see you, I was recently wondering how grad day went! All the best, all the days ... CayCay
Date: 6/27/2016 7:48:00 AM
- Secret nights ..... with romance - Lovely written CayCay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/27/2016 8:00:00 AM
Ain't romance grand? And secrets that hold light? Thanks Anne-Lise. Be well ... CayCay
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