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Secret Hideout

There is a view that sets me free
The mere thought of it soothes my heart
When I encounter glum ennui
My mind conjures it up as art
It’s my safe hideout
Be night or day

It’s a haven whereto I flee
Attributes I couldn’t possibly impart
No matter how moving may be your plea
The mystery is pivotal in part
Its awesome cachet
A fresh bouquet



AP: Honorable Mention 2025, Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on February 12, 2018 for contest RHYME ME A POSIE sponsored by BROKEN WINGS  -  RANKED 6TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haight Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Lovely and mysterious, Line! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Thank you for your always appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.
La France Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Line congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Thank you so much for hosting this marvelous contest, BW. Much appreciated.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win. Yes, hiding sometimes makes you free.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Stebbings Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Everybody should have a secret hideaway with a soothing view. A pleasure to read, Line. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. // Barry
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Thank you, Barry. Glad this one connected with you. I enjoyed reading your poetry. Thanks for your visit and comment.
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