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Secret Admiration

When she comes with her kids to the pool
My admiring eyes
Walks all over her.
Hair
Breast
Legs
Feet
Toes
hands
Finally face
They are all so perfect
Curves in right place and right size
I cannot reveal my admiration, because
She is too young and
I am too old

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/7/2013 7:09:00 AM Good morning, I hope you have been restored to full health. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/6/2013 8:45:00 AM Hello Manel, wow.. how sad when we feel we don't compare. and one more time Manel.. wow... love the way you described her lusty body from head to toe.. love~ SKAT Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 8/6/2013 8:14:00 AM It is not a crime to tell her how you admire her beauty. The world would be a better place if we did more of that! Hugs, Jack xoxox Login to Reply

Cherie Thomas Date: 8/6/2013 2:47:00 AM It's beautiful to admire in that way...no matter what age we are, & the soul lingers with beauty...lovely poem Manel, takecare & blessings always x Cherie<3 Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/5/2013 1:50:00 PM Wow! this is some admiration. Manel - it is not a crime to admire someone. take care and God bless you... Lucilla Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 8/5/2013 8:46:00 PM I agree. May be if one is shy it would be a secret admiration. Thank you my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/5/2013 12:04:00 PM .... you are beautiful Manel! - Unfortunately, we are not forever young. - Good written poems - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 8/5/2013 8:45:00 PM Thank you dearest Anne

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 8/4/2013 11:27:00 PM She is young and you are old. It does not matter Manel, you heart is still young. Nice write. Enjoyed. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 8/4/2013 11:47:00 PM Yes Ravi, Age doesn't exist for admiration, Thanks

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/3/2013 8:58:00 AM I hope you are well Manel, I have not seen you in a few days. Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 8/4/2013 11:48:00 PM Thanks Richard, Yes I am forced to be in bed for few days, Thank you for your concern

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/2/2013 4:50:00 PM This is so good!!! You have captured a mans mind and revealed it's secret. This one made me smile. Login to Reply Manel Gunatillake Date: 8/4/2013 11:49:00 PM I have captured it slightly. Cannot fathom fully, Ha! ha!