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Secret Admiration

When she comes with her kids to the pool My admiring eyes Walks all over her. Hair Breast Legs Feet Toes hands Finally face They are all so perfect Curves in right place and right size I cannot reveal my admiration, because She is too young and I am too old

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2013 7:09:00 AM

Good morning, I hope you have been restored to full health.

Skat A

Date: 8/6/2013 8:45:00 AM

Hello Manel, wow.. how sad when we feel we don't compare. and one more time Manel.. wow... love the way you described her lusty body from head to toe.. love~ SKAT

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/6/2013 8:14:00 AM

It is not a crime to tell her how you admire her beauty. The world would be a better place if we did more of that! Hugs, Jack xoxox

Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/6/2013 2:47:00 AM

It's beautiful to admire in that way...no matter what age we are, & the soul lingers with beauty...lovely poem Manel, takecare & blessings always x Cherie<3

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/5/2013 1:50:00 PM

Wow! this is some admiration. Manel - it is not a crime to admire someone. take care and God bless you... Lucilla

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 8:46:00 PM

I agree. May be if one is shy it would be a secret admiration. Thank you my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2013 12:04:00 PM

.... you are beautiful Manel! - Unfortunately, we are not forever young. - Good written poems - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/5/2013 8:45:00 PM

Thank you dearest Anne

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/4/2013 11:27:00 PM

She is young and you are old. It does not matter Manel, you heart is still young. Nice write. Enjoyed. Thanks for your comment on my poem.

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/4/2013 11:47:00 PM

Yes Ravi, Age doesn't exist for admiration, Thanks

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2013 8:58:00 AM

I hope you are well Manel, I have not seen you in a few days.

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/4/2013 11:48:00 PM

Thanks Richard, Yes I am forced to be in bed for few days, Thank you for your concern

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/2/2013 4:50:00 PM

This is so good!!! You have captured a mans mind and revealed it's secret. This one made me smile.

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 8/4/2013 11:49:00 PM

I have captured it slightly. Cannot fathom fully, Ha! ha!