Second To None



Welcome to the war, son ...
You’ve been conscripted,
go grab a gun
And you daughters 
of the new American flag,
you’re not exempted either
Go get that gat outta my bag
There’s a 21st century civil war goin’ on,
and you gotta declare right now
which side carries the righteous bones
I pray for your sake, that you don’t choose wrong
Us Sons of the Smoking Gun,
we fight for the right to bear arms,
anywhere ... and at all times
Don’t try to put a tamper timer control
on our safety trigger alarm
We firmly believe
that our right to own guns
is second to none
And in fact, the Founding Fathers got it wrong
Constitutionally, our freedom to have guns
shoulda been right number one
And anybody that speaks otherwise,
betta talk to the barrel pressed on their tongue
Shoot first,
ask questions later
That’s the right order ...
Free speech gets trumped
when a gun talks
Whether the caliber of conversation
is big or small,
a cocked trigger silences all
Shoot first,
talk answers later
That’s the right order ... 
one, then two
Dialogue is over,
the gun only speaks bullet truth
Free speechers,
betta let your lady lawyer Miranda
do the talking for you
This war on gun rights is raging so out of control;
but we be on the right side this time, don’t we Johnny Rebel
This ungainly Civil War is taking it’s civilian toll,
there’s gonna be more bloodshed of innocent souls
We gotta end this war, before the next four-year polls close
Time to squash dem blue belly, liberal gun takers,
gonna shut 
every mouth of dem Yankee free speech makers
The right of the gun
to own more metal worshiping slaves,
is gon be at the top of the New Confederate Bill of Rights — 
the six shooter automatically gon be number one
No more free speech talk,
that’s over and done
The right to have a smoking gun
is gonna be constitutionally changed
When this war is won,
the freedom to speak with your gun
is gon be second to none


Poet Note: In the American Constitution's 
Bill of Rights, the first amendment is 
free speech. The second amendment is
the right to bear arms.
— Romantic Warrior

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/26/2017 4:39:00 PM
Im sorry, but it is a stupid second amendment, created at a time where war was prevalent in the states.. Sadly it wont go away and that will not help your nation.. This well written and is thought provoking..
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Date: 10/26/2017 3:31:00 AM
A person who possesses or uses a firearm must have a firearm licence. Licence holders must be at least 18 years of age, have a "genuine reason" for holding a firearm licence, and must not be a "prohibited person". All firearms in Australia must be registered by serial number. Awesome poem Freddie, we in Australia are of the belief that we'll ' take our chances' and get by without them.
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Date: 10/25/2017 10:46:00 PM
I don’t want a gun but am not against people owning them. Obviously we need to look at the whole picture. But it is a great write!
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:29:00 PM
Ty for the kind, thoughtful comments everyone. Yes, this is a satirical piece that shines the light on the unending gun violence in America. I personally never owned a gun, never like them. I grew up in Detroit, which at one time had the highest gun violence/murder rate in the world. That fact still didn't move me to want to own a gun. Gun violence is a serious problem that needs to be addressed. Love and peace always.
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:12:00 PM
Gosh, am I getting this wrong. It sounds kind of tongue in cheek to me!! I'm with Connie below. WE simply need better gun control laws that are actually ENFORCED and properly monitored. it's so senseless when crazy people just walk into a gun store and can get a gun!! I don't know the answer, but I notice other countries sure do not have our high crime rate of death by gun!!
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:08:00 PM
First off, I want to tell you that I wish I could claim ownership of cattitude, but I love that word because I found a T shirt at Walmart with that slogan. It has lots of witty things on it beneath the word Cattitude and the picture of a CAT showing himself like in a mug shot. I get a lot of compliments on that shirt when I wear it to the gym!
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Date: 10/25/2017 6:15:00 PM
A dire prediction--we need that freedom of speech right where it is--at the top! An apt topic!
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Date: 10/25/2017 6:09:00 PM
I am not against our right to bear arms, but I do think that there should be strict background checks for those trying to purchase automatic weapons. You make some good points here Freddie. : )
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