Second Marriage (Footle)

Second Marriage



First wife

gave strife




** for Brian Strand's Footle contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations Sharon on your win in Brian Strand's contest "A Footle Retrospective" Love, Carol
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June 27, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Liked this the first time I read it. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 10:05 PM
and congratulations to you today too, Sharon!! LUv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 3:01 PM
hope I don't ever find out!! congrats on the win!
Richards Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 2:11 PM
That's what the guy says, anyway!! Great job, Sharon!! Congratulations on your win!! :)
Freeman Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 12:52 PM
A lot of that going around in a lot of people. Congratulation, agape, Moses
Gorelick Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Of course he was just perfect. lol..congrats on your win. ! BG
Conway Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Too funny-And I bet it's true! Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~
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June 19, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
Devonshire Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 5:39 PM
Very clever, Sharon. A wonderfully witty footle. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn
Mills Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Very nice! Good luck in the contest! Love, Susan
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June 18, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Lol nice one, very funny, enjoyed your write, good luck on the contest...P.D.
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June 18, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Nice one Sharon, good luck in Brian's contest >> James
Belt Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:33 AM
LOL Good one Sharon....Good Luck in the contest.....Larry
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Good one, Sharon. I have noticed a lot of people rhyme them this way. I try rhyming both syllalbes when I can. It's amazing how many you can think of! About rondeau, I think it was the French originally who did them only 8 syllables per line, but then I learned you could use ten, and the last two I've posted, I took it even farther and did 12 syllable lines. HOpe to see your "first" baby soon! Luv, andrea
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