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Second Chances ~~~*~~~ Her heart is broken, his leaving unbearable, her world is a fog, that she can't see through. His heart is aching, her soul is frozen, all she wants is to see through the sadness. The endless pit she's falling for, how long will this yearning last? She wish's that her heart was made of cast, to shield her from the fire burning deep within. Will she ever be free from his shadows? Will she ever learn how to love again? Waiting as she takes those first steps to a new journey. The winters come and the summers pass by,her life redirected along comes a guy. Her walls are up, so cautious for release,treating it carefully and longing for peace. by cory long and Paul Beadnall for grab a mate and collaborate contest 8-27-2011

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Date: 9/21/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Paul. Love, Carol
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/21/2011 4:35:00 PM
Thanksvery much.. blessings from Paul.
Date: 9/16/2011 3:40:00 PM
this reminded me of myself...thanx for such an emotional write...congratulations...cheers to both of u
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/16/2011 6:59:00 PM
Thanks alot for your kind words,blessings from Paul
Date: 9/16/2011 1:25:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Paul : )
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:19:00 PM
Congrats Paul on your wonderful win with this great collaboration with cory my buddy.. an awesome piece with two special talents ..luv..
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/16/2011 8:23:00 AM
Thanks alot Linda-Marie,appreciated blessings from Paul.
Date: 8/30/2011 3:15:00 PM
Wonderful collaboration, best of luck, I am sending you a soup mail, Paul, in a moment~~
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Date: 8/28/2011 2:45:00 PM
a grreat tandem, cory and paul!.... fluid song!..winners..:) huggs, nette
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 8/28/2011 3:28:00 PM
THANKS ALOT NETTE APPRECIATED AS ALWAYS . BLESSINGS FROM PAUL

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