Second Chances

Second Chances
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Her heart is broken, his leaving unbearable,
 her world is a fog, that she can't see through. 
His heart is aching, her soul is frozen, all she wants is to see through the sadness. 
The endless pit she's falling for, how long will this yearning last? 
She wish's that her heart was made of cast,
 to shield her from the fire burning deep within.
Will she ever be free from his shadows? Will she ever learn how to love again? 
Waiting as she takes those first steps to a new journey.
The winters come and the summers pass by,her life redirected along comes a guy. 
Her walls are up, so cautious for release,treating it carefully and longing for peace. 

by cory long and Paul Beadnall
for grab a mate and collaborate contest
8-27-2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Paul. Love, Carol
Beadnall Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Thanksvery much.. blessings from Paul.
Fiery Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 3:40 PM
this reminded me of myself...thanx for such an emotional write...congratulations...cheers to both of u
Beadnall Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Thanks alot for your kind words,blessings from Paul
Horne Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Paul : )
Sweetheart Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Congrats Paul on your wonderful win with this great collaboration with cory my buddy.. an awesome piece with two special talents ..luv..
Beadnall Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 8:23 AM
Thanks alot Linda-Marie,appreciated blessings from Paul.
La France Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Wonderful collaboration, best of luck, I am sending you a soup mail, Paul, in a moment~~
Onclaud Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 2:45 PM
a grreat tandem, cory and paul!.... fluid song!..winners..:) huggs, nette
Beadnall Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 3:28 PM
THANKS ALOT NETTE APPRECIATED AS ALWAYS . BLESSINGS FROM PAUL
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