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First time around, I slowly locked him out and threw away the keys. Memories of him fell like Autumn leaves. In reality, he was a father that I thought I really knew. But in reality, he was also a father I never really knew. It was when I was shown a different view that he became someone entirely new. After years, and not a few. After years of dismissal and irrelevancy; years I found nothing in him of use to me. Long after his demise, he had become someone unattractive both in my mind and deep inside. Things changed when a younger sister revealed to me a father who made me feel good inside. He became a father who was no longer a thorn in my side. In a very real sense, my life became a dance when I gave my father another look, a second chance. 061025cj

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Date: 6/10/2025 9:23:00 AM
Oh, my, I felt this so much that I think it's personal? You wrote it so well. Poet's, at least this poet, often use poetry as therapy, spilling emotively on 'paper' that they not only know release but also see their feelings looking back at them. WE GROW from such pain. All parents mess us up in some way I feel God intended as part of His plan to grow us. I am sure your Father's ways forced you into dark where you sought light, and maybe grew faith. A touching write. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/10/2025 4:32:00 PM
It's Fathers Day? You'd realize that is ironic if you read my most recent poem (especially my comments to "paige') Go see! Everyone should know what happened. I need to tell my son so he'll tell his Stepdad who doesn't know its Father's Day, either. We know nothing! (Hogans Heroes) CayCay
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/10/2025 10:16:00 AM
Wow, CayCay! What amazing comments! Thank you. Happy Father's Day. Curtis.

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