Seasons of Life

As spring brings life to all that sleep
Spirit, body and mind renew
Joy reflects in bursts of blossoms
Heralding new birth to God’s creation
As man and nature journey as one
In a dance of celebration
Hope reborn in all that live

As the summer of life screeches by
Visitors invited, welcome to share
Love, laughter, living and dying
Soon comes bittersweet joy of liberation
Knocking, bearing gift of freedom
As mountains rise along the way

As the autumn of life drifts in
The lights of my eyes will grow dim
Yet the hummingbird still sings
Joy of my vision, my rock
Through light of day or darkest night
Like a child I trust, I sleep

As the winter of life arrives
When my tresses turn white as snow
With the sound of my voice just a whisper
Though shallow breath, my prayers ascend
To the joy of my salvation
Just beyond invisible gates
I will in quiet adoration kneel


Note:  Written 9/17/09
          By Audrey Carey
          Entry for Constance La France's "Why Oh Why" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gasun Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:55 AM
This is so beautiful my dear friend Annalise! I extremely love your poem and its fascinating image of the seasons of life. When I've read your congratulatory comments, I went to the featured poem page to check. And, I also found yours being one of the Featured Poems for the Week as well. My hearty congratulations to you and thank you so much for stopping by. Have a blessed weekend my dear friend! God bless! love lots, Leonora
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April 13, 2013 at 10:00 PM
Hi Anna, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new week coming up. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
Horstkotter Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 5:27 AM
Very good poem. Enjoyed the read. Congratulations on being featured.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Must have missed this one. Every now and then I'll go back a while and find a gem. Vince
Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
Augustus Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 2:09 PM
I had to read this twice before I totally loved it. I completely loved the last stanza and I figured since I liked the flow of that one that I should reread the rest. I'm glad I did. This is a nice one. Congratulations on getting a win in this contest.
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:20 PM
lovely entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Many congratulations Audrey on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your win Audrey. Love,Carol
Neels Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Audrey a beautiful write indeed. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoy the weekend ahead ;) love Wilma
Taylor Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congrats, Audrey. Well deserved win. Enjoyed. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on this well mdeserved win in the contest, Audrey
Wilson Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 4:12 AM
congrats on your win in Constance's contest..very lovely and expressive..Take care~Deb
La France Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Congratulations, Audrey, with yur placement in my contest, Why Oh Why ~~
Mannan Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 3:12 AM
what a beautiful and full of images poem Many congratulations to you too.
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 9:42 PM
VEry nice, Audrey. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
Lewis Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 12:57 PM
thats tight x
Fraser Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 11:06 AM
Superb poem Audrey, you have hit the highs with this lovely poem >> James
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October 12, 2009 at 6:59 PM
absolutely stunning! Audrey! to my favs!!!!! jim
Smith Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Hi, Audrey I enjoyed reading your poem. How you described the seasons was superior. Keep writing, Donielle S.
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 12:17 PM
I can't believe I missed reading this wonderful write. It is amazing Audrey. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 10:17 AM
I love the metaphoric ideas here. I especially like the last stanza and your presentation. Keep writing. Sara
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September 17, 2009 at 3:48 PM
Such a beautiful, expression of your Faith... You captured a very significant point about rebirth... Spring... if this happens in nature... why not in the human-sphere? Earth's formation and makeup is just as complicated as our human selves... Your Poem will make the thinking mind go 'humm? Beautifully put, illustration... Are You New to the Soup Audrey? If So... Welcome and Keep writing... MoonBee
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