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Seasons of Life

As spring brings life to all that sleep Spirit, body and mind renew Joy reflects in bursts of blossoms Heralding new birth to God’s creation As man and nature journey as one In a dance of celebration Hope reborn in all that live As the summer of life screeches by Visitors invited, welcome to share Love, laughter, living and dying Soon comes bittersweet joy of liberation Knocking, bearing gift of freedom As mountains rise along the way As the autumn of life drifts in The lights of my eyes will grow dim Yet the hummingbird still sings Joy of my vision, my rock Through light of day or darkest night Like a child I trust, I sleep As the winter of life arrives When my tresses turn white as snow With the sound of my voice just a whisper Though shallow breath, my prayers ascend To the joy of my salvation Just beyond invisible gates I will in quiet adoration kneel Note: Written 9/17/09 By Audrey Carey Entry for Constance La France's "Why Oh Why" Contest

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Date: 4/14/2013 10:55:00 AM
This is so beautiful my dear friend Annalise! I extremely love your poem and its fascinating image of the seasons of life. When I've read your congratulatory comments, I went to the featured poem page to check. And, I also found yours being one of the Featured Poems for the Week as well. My hearty congratulations to you and thank you so much for stopping by. Have a blessed weekend my dear friend! God bless! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 4/13/2013 10:00:00 PM
Hi Anna, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new week coming up. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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Date: 4/9/2013 5:27:00 AM
Very good poem. Enjoyed the read. Congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:56:00 PM
Must have missed this one. Every now and then I'll go back a while and find a gem. Vince
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:09:00 PM
I had to read this twice before I totally loved it. I completely loved the last stanza and I figured since I liked the flow of that one that I should reread the rest. I'm glad I did. This is a nice one. Congratulations on getting a win in this contest.
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:20:00 PM
lovely entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:08:00 AM
Many congratulations Audrey on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Audrey. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:55:00 AM
Audrey a beautiful write indeed. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoy the weekend ahead ;) love Wilma
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:35:00 AM
Congrats, Audrey. Well deserved win. Enjoyed. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on this well mdeserved win in the contest, Audrey
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:12:00 AM
congrats on your win in Constance's contest..very lovely and expressive..Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations, Audrey, with yur placement in my contest, Why Oh Why ~~
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:12:00 AM
what a beautiful and full of images poem Many congratulations to you too.
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:42:00 PM
VEry nice, Audrey. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/25/2009 12:57:00 PM
thats tight x
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Date: 10/17/2009 11:06:00 AM
Superb poem Audrey, you have hit the highs with this lovely poem >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 6:59:00 PM
absolutely stunning! Audrey! to my favs!!!!! jim
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Date: 10/11/2009 12:24:00 PM
Hi, Audrey I enjoyed reading your poem. How you described the seasons was superior. Keep writing, Donielle S.
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Date: 10/8/2009 12:17:00 PM
I can't believe I missed reading this wonderful write. It is amazing Audrey. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2009 10:17:00 AM
I love the metaphoric ideas here. I especially like the last stanza and your presentation. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/17/2009 3:48:00 PM
Such a beautiful, expression of your Faith... You captured a very significant point about rebirth... Spring... if this happens in nature... why not in the human-sphere? Earth's formation and makeup is just as complicated as our human selves... Your Poem will make the thinking mind go 'humm? Beautifully put, illustration... Are You New to the Soup Audrey? If So... Welcome and Keep writing... MoonBee
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