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Season's First Rainfall

The sky is leaden, season's first rain begins to fall. The earth is thirsty but cannot quench it's thirst and the sound of rain is not soothing in summer. For a shower's while water spills over the roads,lanes,yards..... as local ponds vanished, drains,rills encroached and filled with clay. The hills from where the rivers originate are barren trees fallen in large scale. Though the paddy fields await with glee the rain, pitter-patter on the roof brings little comfort, for the price is still to be paid. The rain once welcomed with elation now falls on a jaded land. Each time they are ready to shift their belongings, but not ready to right the wrongs.

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Date: 2/21/2025 8:24:00 PM
Sounds as if the rain will be too little, too late. Very descriptive, Akham. Janice
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/21/2025 10:14:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/20/2025 2:00:00 PM
I will pray for more rain to quench your dry land Akham. A wonderful write… Beryl
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/20/2025 7:43:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/20/2025 3:01:00 AM
I wonder who the greedy people at the top who are taking more than their share. Sad when corruption is in any land. It usually gives little hope to the younger generation for a bright future. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/20/2025 4:50:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 2/20/2025 1:14:00 AM
Because water is so important, this poem worries me. It sounds like water is diverted from fields. The earth was perfect, but intrusion disrupts it. This is a wonderful environmental poem.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/20/2025 4:50:00 AM
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Date: 2/19/2025 12:57:00 PM
very profound one. I enjoyed this
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/19/2025 7:37:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/19/2025 11:01:00 AM
Incredible how rain falls on so many places and so very little in Malta.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/19/2025 7:37:00 PM
Thank you

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