Season's First Rainfall

The sky is leaden,
season's first rain
begins to fall.
The earth is thirsty
but cannot quench it's thirst
and the sound of rain
is not soothing in summer.
For a shower's while
water spills over
the roads,lanes,yards.....
as local ponds vanished,
drains,rills  encroached
and filled with clay.

The hills from where
the rivers originate are barren
trees fallen in large scale.

Though the paddy fields
await with glee the rain,
pitter-patter on the roof
brings little comfort,
for the price is still 
to be paid.

The rain once welcomed
with elation
now falls on a jaded land.
Each time they are ready
to shift their belongings,
but not ready
to right the wrongs.
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Date: 2/21/2025 8:24:00 PM
Sounds as if the rain will be too little, too late. Very descriptive, Akham. Janice
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/21/2025 10:14:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/20/2025 2:00:00 PM
I will pray for more rain to quench your dry land Akham. A wonderful write… Beryl
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/20/2025 7:43:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/20/2025 3:01:00 AM
I wonder who the greedy people at the top who are taking more than their share. Sad when corruption is in any land. It usually gives little hope to the younger generation for a bright future. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/20/2025 4:50:00 AM
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Date: 2/20/2025 1:14:00 AM
Because water is so important, this poem worries me. It sounds like water is diverted from fields. The earth was perfect, but intrusion disrupts it. This is a wonderful environmental poem.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/20/2025 4:50:00 AM
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Date: 2/19/2025 12:57:00 PM
very profound one. I enjoyed this
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 2/19/2025 7:37:00 PM
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