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Season's End

SEASON’S END

In contest
Summer ways
In meltdown

From the north
One more blast
Polar chill

Leaves wither
Start to fall
Trees exposed

Entered Tricube Poetry contest
Sponsor Sara Kendrick
26/1/2023

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Jim Slaughter

Date: 2/2/2023 11:41:00 AM

This is a wonderful piece, Harry. Every time I start to think it's easing up here, there's another "blast of polar chill" that comes down the pike. My desk calendar tells me that Spring begins on March 20...none too soon for me. BOL in the contest.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/1/2023 7:51:00 AM

Congrats on your win Harry, blessings, Jennifer.

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/1/2023 4:45:00 AM

Great poem , so very well put together, love this

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2023 6:33:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Harry -

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/30/2023 9:35:00 AM

Hi Harry, What a descriptive write, full of imagery and your 9 short lines present such a breath taking creative poem. Best for a win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2023 4:49:00 AM

Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/29/2023 9:19:00 PM

Great scene. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/29/2023 4:48:00 PM

Dear Harry, your vivid imagery makes for a wonderful poem. Vibrant brevity. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2023 9:20:00 AM

hello, Harry . Lovely to see you doing this contest. I know it got judged and am hoping you were on the generous list. You just have to be!! I see my friend Jack was here and Mandy said hello to him. Love seeing things like that. Have a glorious Sunday, Harry.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/28/2023 6:43:00 AM

a really lovely tricube here - i hope you are feeling much better, my friend. PLease say Hi to Mandy from me, next time you speak to her

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/29/2023 12:50:00 AM

Hi to you Jack. Mandy x

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/28/2023 6:04:00 AM

Excellent poem. Harry. ! You are in my thoughts. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/27/2023 9:22:00 PM

Harry, not sure why, but i deeply feel a compassion with them in /for that exposure. Could be we ARE to note their handling of that chill, like mirrors, of way we might handle it or view it. I have come to see their nakedness as qeite beautiful and as glorious as when they are fat with leaves. What if Adam & Eve had been proud of the nakedness of body AND soul? Hmmm. So goo 2 C. U back! sally

Valsa George

Date: 1/27/2023 8:32:00 PM

The winter blast in the end of January is just temporary ! It will soon pass and spring will be there to bring you cheer. Wish you a happy spring with plenty of sunshine and beauty, dear harry

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/27/2023 4:41:00 PM

Bitter winds Harry we have had quite A few this month, as to be expected.' Enjoy the sun there it will be getting a Ljttle cooler now for you. I guess.? All blessings.'

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/27/2023 3:13:00 PM

Winter passes, and then comes the renewal in the bright sunshine of spring, hold onto springs sunshine and hope dear friend, and be well. Our prayers, that of friends, poets and my family are with you Harry. Your poem is beautiful.