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Seasons Change Places

Seasons Change Places Thick fog scampers up steep hills in billowing tendrils Ocean winds sweep in on heavy mists at sunset Summer shivers as days grow shorter Skies reflect amber, golden hues of twilight leaves Autumn approaches. 8-21-21

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/24/2021 8:22:00 PM

Superb write, Sam. Autumn's slow arrival is conveyed strikingly in the images here. Thank you for your visits to my small offerings. Best wishes, Brian

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/24/2021 4:34:00 AM

A stunning reflection of nature upon your verse, my dearest friend, Sam! Stay healthy!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/1/2021 4:53:00 PM

Thank you dear friend! As autumn approaches we see the fog thicken, then rush up the hills from the ocean. We notice the change in the temperature as the days grow shorter. Subtle changes but we feel the seasons change! Sending you blessings a continued warm days and peaceful nights!

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/24/2021 2:17:00 AM

I feel serenity in this magical write!Sperb moment in time captured in just few powerful words....This poem sings to my heart. A fav!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/23/2021 11:39:00 PM

I'm looking forward to our summer Sam, here in Aus, But sure do know the sense of feeling you project with this wonderful poetry.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/23/2021 11:15:00 PM

'Summer shivers as days go shorter!' Great! Congratulations on your win!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/3/2021 11:44:00 AM

Hi Chris! Thank you. As the days grow shorter and the nights longer I find myself feeling the chill especiallyu at night! Time to get out the thicker sweaters and warm, cozy blankets. Hope you are well. Blessings to you!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/23/2021 10:20:00 AM

Dear Sam, a beautiful picture of how fast seasons change, and how it's impact gets reflected in the places.. and the golden hues of twilight leaves as autumn approaches... Here, in India, the peak of Summer is over in some places, while the other places in Western Ghats experience monsoon at this time... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/22/2021 7:57:00 PM

I especially love these lines: Summer shivers as days grow shorter and Skies reflect amber, golden hues of twilight leaves. Awesome imagery! This is a fave, my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2021 11:06:00 PM

Great descriptive write, Sam. The days are warm, but a cool breeze under the shade of the tall oak tree as i swing my grandson on his swing.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/22/2021 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Eve. Our liquid amber trees sport patches of color and there is an occasional whiff of autumn in the air. Summer is leaving too fast for me but once I let go I know I will embrace autumn. Your message leaves me with a delightful picture of you and your grandson. I can hear your laughter. Thank for that photograph! Hope you are well. Sending blessings your way.