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Seasons Change Lune

Autumn speaks to me
Golden tones
Leaves are whispering 

Blue skies arc
Bare branches appear
Winter’s bones

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Date: 12/29/2021 7:20:00 AM
Two seasons!
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Date: 12/21/2021 9:43:00 AM
These haiku are gorgeous SuZ. I am Faving them! You are such a talented Poet. I miss having you here in Hawaii. Blessings and Mele Kalikimaka my friend. xxoo
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Date: 11/3/2021 5:59:00 PM
You display the golden and blue of autumn so well here! Lovely~
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Date: 10/26/2021 12:57:00 PM
So much imagery with so few words. Bravo. ;0)
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Date: 10/24/2021 11:13:00 PM
You nailed it: with the bare branches comes the bonus of being able to appreciate the blue sky (winter is our dry season here).
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/25/2021 8:20:00 AM
So true Suzette: I live in a wooded area and never see other houses until Winter when all the leaves are gone. Thanks for visiting. SuZ
Date: 10/24/2021 11:11:00 AM
I love the transition from autumn to winter, beautifully penned Suz:-) hugs Jan xx
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/25/2021 8:08:00 AM
Hi Jan: I love each season for it’s certain qualities but Autumn touches me most of all. Best, SuZ
Date: 10/24/2021 10:59:00 AM
My favourite season Suz, you captured it well in your haiku. Tom
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/25/2021 8:07:00 AM
Hi Tom…always good to see you and hear your encouraging words. SuZ
Date: 10/24/2021 9:45:00 AM
Hi SuZ! This is so visual. Love your creative and unique images. I can feel autumn though your lune! Blessings.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/25/2021 8:06:00 AM
Hi Sam: So nice to have your encouraging words. Best, SuZ
Date: 10/24/2021 9:38:00 AM
Dear Suzanne, I too love autumn and your skillful Haiku speaks to me..... Lovely! You may want to check out my page~I have several poems on Autumn. Blessings, Paulette
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/25/2021 8:05:00 AM
Thanks for your visit Paulette….sister lover of Autumn. SuZ
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