White Wolf Poet Cinqku

Seasons:

Summer
Searing sun
Children swimming
In the cool fresh water
Relief.


Autumn
Leaves changing
Evergreens remain
Hibernation awaits
Sleep mode.


Winter
Dying sun
Children indoors
Staying warm near fire
Cozzie.


Springtime
Life begins
Flowers blooming
Caterpillars give birth
Buds sprout.

4~1~2017

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Reason A. Poteet January 9, 2017 at 8:00 PM Great cingku, White Wolf. Almost used that form myself, it is very versatile. I enjoyed your little vignettes on the seasons. My favorite line: sleep mode. Kudos to the poet, you did well.

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2017 at 10:03 PM This is great to read, White Wolf. Many people share the same impressions of the seasons. WEll shown! White Wolf January 5, 2017 at 10:09 PM Thanks, Andrea. It's me Budgie /|\ Just thought I'd have a change for the new year, Haha. Did you enjoy your holy days?

Space Cadet January 4, 2017 at 7:28 PM Love the flow of this. There are some choice lines in here Searing sun Children swimming Relief Autumn Evergreens remain Hibernation awaits Winter Dying sun Children indoors Staying warm near fire Cozzie. Love this stanza.. buds a sprout . Great addition Rick. I love season poems. -- wesley C Space Cadet January 11, 2017 at 7:40 PM Each word is so precise, each word matters. White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 7:35 PM Thanks, Wesley, I though I'd try my hand at a new form. /|\

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 4, 2017 at 3:23 PM Cool cinqku, Rick. I like the change of seasons in this poem. Both are enjoyable. Very well written. Happy New Year. May love light your path to peace, my friend. White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 4:28 PM Yeah, I thought I'd try my hand at a new form. I've added the other two seasons now. Thanks, RW. All the best to you in the new year my friend /|\

Morgen Farmer January 4, 2017 at 2:15 PM I really liked this one Rick, it's like a scene playing in your mind. White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 4:26 PM Thank you, Morgen /|\

Paloma P January 4, 2017 at 7:38 AM I like the juxtaposition, as I get older I'm much preferring Spring and Autumn, not so extreme. :) White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 7:57 AM Yeah, juxtapose the summer and the cold water, though! (Did I use that correctly?) Hehe. I love to swim in the hot days. I always learn from you. Latin "juxta" next, "pono" put. Place side by side. /|\

Chris Green January 4, 2017 at 6:17 AM Very cool Rick. I like how this reads and appears on the page. But, you still owe us two seasons. :) White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 4:25 PM I added in the other two seasons /|\ White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 6:21 AM Haha, maybe I should call it "wet and dry" then! Hard to do spring because it's only one syllable! But autumn works! /|\

Probir Gupta January 4, 2017 at 6:13 AM Beautiful ... Picturesque ... White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 6:22 AM Sorry, Probir, and thank you /|\ White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 6:18 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2017 at 4:49 AM - A perfect picture of summer and winter, Rick - hugs // Anne-Lise :) White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 6:23 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise /|\

Darren White January 4, 2017 at 3:00 AM Budgie! :) The forms are so cool, I never wrote one, and centered it's awesome. Beautiful contrasts and extremes. Well done! White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 3:15 AM Let's see if this one works! Thanks, Darren /|\

Doug Vinson January 4, 2017 at 2:44 AM Cheers, Budgie. : ) White Wolf January 4, 2017 at 3:05 AM Cheers, Doug /|\