Seasons:

Summer Searing sun Children swimming In the cool fresh water Relief. Autumn Leaves changing Evergreens remain Hibernation awaits Sleep mode. Winter Dying sun Children indoors Staying warm near fire Cozzie. Springtime Life begins Flowers blooming Caterpillars give birth Buds sprout. 4~1~2017

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/9/2017 8:00:00 PM

Great cingku, White Wolf. Almost used that form myself, it is very versatile. I enjoyed your little vignettes on the seasons. My favorite line: sleep mode. Kudos to the poet, you did well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2017 10:03:00 PM

This is great to read, White Wolf. Many people share the same impressions of the seasons. WEll shown!

White Wolf
Date: 1/5/2017 10:09:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. It's me Budgie /|\ Just thought I'd have a change for the new year, Haha. Did you enjoy your holy days?

Space Cadet

Date: 1/4/2017 7:28:00 PM

Love the flow of this. There are some choice lines in here Searing sun Children swimming Relief Autumn Evergreens remain Hibernation awaits Winter Dying sun Children indoors Staying warm near fire Cozzie. Love this stanza.. buds a sprout . Great addition Rick. I love season poems. -- wesley C

Space Cadet
Date: 1/11/2017 7:40:00 PM

Each word is so precise, each word matters.

White Wolf
Date: 1/4/2017 7:35:00 PM

Thanks, Wesley, I though I'd try my hand at a new form. /|\

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/4/2017 3:23:00 PM

Cool cinqku, Rick. I like the change of seasons in this poem. Both are enjoyable. Very well written. Happy New Year. May love light your path to peace, my friend.

White Wolf
Date: 1/4/2017 4:28:00 PM

Yeah, I thought I'd try my hand at a new form. I've added the other two seasons now. Thanks, RW. All the best to you in the new year my friend /|\

Morgen Farmer

Date: 1/4/2017 2:15:00 PM

I really liked this one Rick, it's like a scene playing in your mind.

White Wolf
Date: 1/4/2017 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Morgen /|\

Paloma P

Date: 1/4/2017 7:38:00 AM

I like the juxtaposition, as I get older I'm much preferring Spring and Autumn, not so extreme. :)

White Wolf
Date: 1/4/2017 7:57:00 AM

Yeah, juxtapose the summer and the cold water, though! (Did I use that correctly?) Hehe. I love to swim in the hot days. I always learn from you. Latin "juxta" next, "pono" put. Place side by side. /|\