Seasons

Summer ends, turns to fall Yearly trends, winter calls "Essence Poetry" A structured form with two lines, six syllables in each line with both an end rhyme and internal rhyme. .....JP.......10/3/06....

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Sue Mason

Date: 1/12/2010 11:54:00 AM

Very clever, Jared and I like your new "form".

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2010 1:41:00 PM

Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jared >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2010 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jared. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 1/11/2010 1:43:00 AM

Essence poetry at its finest, Jared. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 1/11/2010 12:01:00 AM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Jared.Rgds Brian

John Freeman

Date: 1/10/2010 7:41:00 PM

Congratulations Jared. Hi! Much deserved feature on this write. Friend, where have you been, drop over and see me. Sincerely, Moses

P Sheart

Date: 1/10/2010 4:04:00 PM

Hi Jared, Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

Date: 1/10/2010 2:03:00 PM

You have me smiling with this seasonal gem. Much said in just two lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen