Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Seasons

Summer ends, turns to fall
Yearly trends, winter calls


                                                              "Essence Poetry"
                                                              A structured form with two lines,                      
                                                              six syllables in each line with both
                                                              an end rhyme and internal rhyme.
.....JP.......10/3/06....

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Sue Mason January 12, 2010 at 11:54 AM Very clever, Jared and I like your new "form".

James Fraser January 11, 2010 at 1:41 PM Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jared >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown January 11, 2010 at 4:42 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jared. Love, Carol

Elaine George January 11, 2010 at 1:43 AM Essence poetry at its finest, Jared. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand January 11, 2010 at 12:01 AM Congrats on your feature poem this week Jared.Rgds Brian

John Freeman January 10, 2010 at 7:41 PM Congratulations Jared. Hi! Much deserved feature on this write. Friend, where have you been, drop over and see me. Sincerely, Moses

P Sheart January 10, 2010 at 4:04 PM Hi Jared, Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

January 10, 2010 at 2:03 PM You have me smiling with this seasonal gem. Much said in just two lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Janette Fisher January 10, 2010 at 12:03 PM Brillian!!!! I love reading your work Jared. Many congrats on your feature this week. Regards Janette

John Freeman July 21, 2009 at 10:47 AM Neat form, Jared, Has been good reading, as always, Godly love Moses!

Raul Moreno July 11, 2009 at 11:57 PM Come to chat!!!

Raul Moreno July 10, 2009 at 12:07 AM Great work with the Essence, thanks for your supportive comments and welcome to Poetry Soup...Raul

James Fraser July 5, 2009 at 2:34 PM I like this form, need to give this a try or two, thx for highlighting said style>>James