Seasons-Footle Haibuns

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Brian Strand, is the creator of Footles. Each Footle has 2 syllables. I have used a haibun style of narrative before the footles (instead of haiku)

Autumn Let us begin in the current season, Not the season of beginnings but of seasoning. Leaves bold Wise, old Winter Hither it comes, white or gray, falling, failing, smarting, incredibly enlightening. Lets go New show Spring New birds of millenials herded into facebook frames, those cribs engaged with each month’s age. I look on, remembering how this boomer’s recollection is in a box, more than one. Face crib Ad lib Summer Watch those new birdies fly. Life is fleeting. Parents hold onto their wings, sometimes clipping. Grandparents no longer open their wallets to show their pride, but with much more intensity and videos, besides, put the kids front and center for thumbs up, hearts, exclamations, tears, never anger. Emotes Devotes

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Paige Hind

Date: 11/8/2024 6:26:00 PM

Your personification of the seasons was so perfect, Kim....I loved Winter's best. <3

Joel Hawksley

Date: 11/3/2024 4:35:00 AM

Your 'Seasons-Footle Haibuns' is a delightful and innovative exploration of the changing seasons. The combination of haibun and footles creates a unique and engaging style. Your ability to capture the essence of each season through vivid imagery and concise language is impressive. I'm particularly drawn to how you use the footles to add a playful and humorous touch to the poems. Keep experimenting with different forms and pushing the boundaries of poetic expression.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 11:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Joel!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2024 9:49:00 AM

This was so creative mixing having with footles. Autumn and winter footles were my faves

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2024 2:48:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/1/2024 11:28:00 AM

"New birds of millenials herded into facebook frames, those cribs engaged with each month’s age. I look on, remembering how this boomer’s recollection is in a box, more than one." Brilliant use of words. Very entertaining and talented write.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2024 12:58:00 PM

Thank you, Joe! :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/1/2024 11:07:00 AM

Dear Kim, your haibun-style piece beautifully captures the essence of each season, both in nature and in human life. The footles add a rhythmic punctuation, distilling complex emotions into concise, powerful phrases. I very much enjoyed reading this poem. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2024 12:59:00 PM

Blessings of the season and approaching culmination of Thanksgiving! Thank you, Daniel!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/1/2024 10:24:00 AM

What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... Have a wonderful day...............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2024 11:03:00 AM

Thanks, Paula!