Seasonal Gifts That Give Me Pleasure

In Winter it's a new laid blanket of snow--
pristine, immaculate, innocent...holy.

Spring brings a softer air, at once
both fecund and perfumed, and
wildflowers leap into life, and trees
are reborn in gradients of green,
and life is temperate, gentle, fragile,
caught dangling between two brutes.

Summer feeds me: passion-hued 
strawberries, fat blueberries, corn-
on-the-cob fit for kings and queens,
while fireflies dance and crickets sing
for our secret and quiet pleasure.

Now Autumn is different-- a season
to glory death and singe our unseen
immortal parts awake. The trees shed
their technicolor tears to lay a carpet
of sadness: by far the bravest season.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Alex Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 9:29 PM
Seasons, surely give us pleasure. Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Thank you my friend!!!
Kauffman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Just lovely LJ! What beautiful "gifts" you highlight in amazing images - "technicolor tears," "passion-hued," "caught dangling." Wonderful use of words. Your poem captures the flow of the days moving effortlessly season to season. Congratulations on your win!
Carber Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 10:52 AM
Thanks Sam--that's extra-special coming from you, my friend!
Alex Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Enjoyed reading this one. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Carber Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Thank you, Sara
La France Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 3:21 PM
LJ, I love your poem of seasons, so many great lines, congratulations on your win _Constance
Carber Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Thank you Constance, it is very much appreciated!
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Congrats on your win, LJ ~ well penned
Carber Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 7:36 AM
Thank you Line!
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Delightful. Well done, L.J. Congrats.
Carber Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Thanks, Line, I'm glad you liked it
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Congratulations on your placement win. A beautiful well-written spring and seasonal poem. Enjoyed.
Carber Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Susan, I'm very happy that you liked it!
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 5:10 PM
A lovely foray through the seasons. My daughter made blueberry cobbler from fresh picked blueberries a couple of days ago. It was refreshing, as was your poem.
Carber Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Oh, how I love blueberry cobbler! So you gave me one of the highest of compliments--thanks, James.
Krampe Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 5:28 PM
I enjoyed your poem, len. There are wonderful things in each season. Congrats on your placement. I like your imagery.
Carber Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 5:30 PM
Thank you, Agnes-- I liked your poem to, which I had just read as it happens!
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:56 AM
Nice one, congrats Len...huggs
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:03 PM
such vivid description of our amazing seasons - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:55 PM
LEN, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
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