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Seasonal Decay

a few white clouds quietly look on, cover of leaves yellow, red and green, buried underneath berries, dry seeds, await season, to our eyes unseen! nature gardens its own vast meadows, its autumn wind works the sweeping broom, smell of ripened fruits spread in bare woods, aura of fermenting decay loom! decay an expression of all life, phase so intrinsic to creation, deep within softening core of fruit, rest the birth of next generation! despair not with process of decay, either in life, in death, love in vain, from dying embers of times gone past, bright new flowers of hope sprout again! 4th placement Written 24/09/2020 ‘Decay’ Poetry contest Constance La France 9 syllables each line 2nd and 4th lines rhyme 4 quatrains syllables checked at Poetrysoup.com

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Date: 10/2/2020 6:32:00 AM
- A hopeful poem, Krish :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/2/2020 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise! There is till hope for US after the season of decay from Trump!:)
Date: 9/29/2020 10:04:00 PM
Great imagery , Krish, with hope of life. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/29/2020 10:33:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Hope the essence of life! we all hope for better things!
Date: 9/29/2020 6:06:00 PM
Krish, oh Krish!... Your poem is a breath of sweetness... Super beautiful images, the seed within, the unseen awaiting. Very nicely structured poem. A huge credit to you! .. Should have been higher on the list. My warm Congratulations.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/29/2020 10:32:00 PM
Sigrid Your words and appreciation are the real award! I am motivated by contests and it helps me write. Thank you so much for your kind words! They mean a lot!
Date: 9/29/2020 1:59:00 PM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/29/2020 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Constance. Thank you for organising this contest and for your generosity in considering mine for an award!!
Date: 9/25/2020 6:05:00 AM
A wonderful entry that I hope merits the sponsor's favor. God bless you with many more.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/25/2020 6:16:00 AM
Regina Thank you. So pleased with your visit and your kind feedback! :)

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