A Slippery Shadow

A saffron sun sinks into a sea of aquamarine. And chartreuse shadows slip-slide between frothy waves of white. Night's ebony fingers dip into the coral waters. And Sol paints shades of crimson upon pale lavender clouds. Tangerine moonbeams gather like fairies in the darkness. And silhouettes trap color, storing each pigment in black. A watermelon sunset marks the start of Sol's descent. And lilac-scented breezes tickle the leaves till they laugh. Like a slippery shadow, darkness spreads over the land. And dusk unveils twinkling stars; adding grandeur to the night.

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Date: 4/18/2021 5:44:00 AM
wow that nice, I can smell it. xo
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Date: 4/18/2021 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Mystic, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/14/2021 12:27:00 AM
Wow Congrats! Thanks likewise for this example, exemplifying what your contest asks for. God bless you.
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Date: 4/14/2021 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2021 12:23:00 AM
I like this colorful winning work. It also good rhythm, rhyme and flow. Congrats on the win. Sara
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Date: 4/9/2021 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/7/2021 3:58:00 AM
Excellent blank verse poem, Emile:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!
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Date: 4/7/2021 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/4/2021 11:59:00 PM
This is so lovely, Emile, a great example, the colours simply merged with the poem:)
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Date: 4/5/2021 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Jo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/4/2021 2:17:00 PM
Just the way I imagined a poem using those colors might look. Beautiful and thanx for my contest win
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Date: 4/4/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, you are welcome, have a Happy Easter my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/4/2021 10:24:00 AM
Emile, what a wonderful poem and great use of words. A great example for your contest, hope I can pen something as lovely, hugs _Constance
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Date: 4/4/2021 2:10:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I look forward to reading you entry my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/4/2021 9:47:00 AM
So beautifully done....love it :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2021 2:10:00 PM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/19/2017 4:09:00 PM
A beautiful scene you portray and a colorful write Emile. Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 8/19/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan, Congratulations on your 1st Place win! I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/19/2017 2:28:00 PM
I'm very happy to see you on the top 10 list, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 8/19/2017 6:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Lin, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/19/2017 12:58:00 PM
Congrats Emile!
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Date: 8/19/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate it, Emile
Date: 8/19/2017 12:37:00 PM
Congrats!!! Emile...nicely done my friend...
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Date: 8/19/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thanks, I appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 8/19/2017 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your 10th Place win! This was a very tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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Date: 8/19/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Dale, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 8/16/2017 3:16:00 PM
what an amazing picture and you paint the sunset so gloriously Emile:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/16/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, as always I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/16/2017 11:36:00 AM
A spectacular vision of sunset and an equally beautiful picture in your words, Emile.
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Date: 8/16/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thanks Lin, as always my friend, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 8/16/2017 9:27:00 AM
Wow Emile. This poem and the picture are both Spectacular. I love it and this one is a favorite :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/16/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, I can always count on you to bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
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