Seasonal Color

Summer Sunset

I smiled at seagulls dancing on the beach at low tide
and dug my toes into lemon-colored grains of sand,
nearly the same light hue of a fresh egg yolk,  if fried
in Summer heat of the saffron sun's outstretched hand

I'd enjoy being alone today and feeling a bit recluse
I planned to bask and tan for a while near the dunes
In a swimsuit of lilac flowers, ruffled in chartreuse
while listening to orchestral music of my favorite tunes

I'd been lulled by the rhythm of waves on the shore
mingled with scent of lavender and soon I fell asleep 
The slight sting of a burn had set in. It was past four
and what I wanted was to bathe my body in the deep

The waters of the sea were not quite emerald green
Nor the cerulean blue of a preening peacock's feather
It shimmered in late afternoon, as a bright aquamarine
I waded in but kept an eye on the changing weather

A wave washed me ashore and beside me a conch lay
pearly shades of watermelon and pink, imbedded inside
Then my eyes were drawn to a coral sky above the quay
On the horizon a tangerine sunset, so lovely that I cried



     August 2nd 2017~Seasonal Color Contest
                      Colors to be used:
aquamarine~cerulean~chartreuse~coral~lavender
    lemon~lilac~saffron~tangerine~watermelon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/19/2017 4:05:00 PM
A lovely write Lin. Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 8/19/2017 12:57:00 PM
Congrats Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2017 2:42:00 PM
thanks, Vijay. I just commented on yours.
Date: 8/19/2017 12:35:00 PM
Back to... Congrats!!! my friend...beautifully done Lin...
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2017 12:37:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, WW. It's appreciated.
Date: 8/19/2017 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your 7th Place win! This was a very tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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Date: 8/19/2017 12:34:00 PM
My pleasure to write for you, Dale.
Date: 8/3/2017 10:04:00 PM
A nice summery picture emerges from your poem. Well done with the difficult colors, and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/4/2017 9:17:00 AM
Thanks so much, Agnes. Your well wishes are appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2017 7:20:00 PM
oh, lin, this is just gorgeous! your words actually shine much brighter than the lovely picture you've chosen to accompany the poem (and the picture is amazing!). it would be hard to top this one in the contest...
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Date: 8/3/2017 4:23:00 AM
You're such a kind hearted person, Ilene. I thank you very sincerely for your sweet thoughts on this one. It was a pleasure to write for a "colorful" contest and Dale chose a beautiful assortment of them. ;-) I'll return the photo after contest.
Date: 8/2/2017 3:30:00 PM
Beautifully expressed my lady...there should be one more color...the color of envy...a winner in my envious eyes lol...^WW^
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Date: 8/2/2017 3:39:00 PM
Envy is a shade of green I've no use for. Thanks very much.
Date: 8/2/2017 1:59:00 PM
absolutely stunning Lin I better start writing for that second place! an absolute gem i am sure Dale will love it! Am adding it to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/2/2017 2:23:00 PM
Always play to win, Jan. Thank you for such a sweet compliment and for the fave.
Date: 8/2/2017 9:22:00 AM
A virtual wonderment of splendor Lin. Great usage of the words.
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Date: 8/2/2017 12:01:00 PM
Many thanks for your comments and encouragement, Tim.
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