Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Season of Snows

Lifeless shiver the decaying meadows
Where blizzards of winter exact a toll,
Freezing foliage in autumnal throes;
Dimming ambitions of parching knoll.

Golden beams glimmer dreams of dawn
Soothing miseries of trembling night,
Now that splendorous autumn is gone,
Sprinkling delight on withering blight.

Season of snows flaunts nature aglow
Where rivers freeze, struggle to flow,
Prairies enliven, donning falling snow;
While mountaintops adorn glacial glow.

January 14, 2023
Placed 2nd: 12 Lines of Rhyme-Winter Nature Themed
Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Evelyn Judy Buehler May 15, 2023 at 8:37 PM There is beauty and joy in every season, as evinced by this amazing poem. Very lovely, Vijay.

Paul Callus February 8, 2023 at 12:18 AM I am not too keen on winter, Vijay, but reading this poem somehow assures me that watching the beauty of this snowy season is worthwhile. ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 10:01 AM Congratulations on your win. Winter is pretty/wonderful but cold. I enjoyed your write. Have a great/blessed day............

Linda Alice Fowler January 24, 2023 at 5:45 PM I so love this Vijay. The beauty flows effortlessly from your pen. Congratulations on your win! :)

Bj Legros Kelley January 21, 2023 at 12:38 AM Beautiful Vijay! Your poem played like a film, moving with each word, I love this! Vijay Pandit January 21, 2023 at 6:58 AM Appreciate the kind words my friend. Many thanks, BJ

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2023 at 5:54 PM Beautiful images and a sure winner I think! Vijay Pandit January 21, 2023 at 6:57 AM So nice to hear that from you Andrea. Many thanks.

Suzanne Delaney January 20, 2023 at 2:58 PM The beauty of winter is fine to enjoy when in front of a crackling fireplace wrapped in a cozy blanket. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ Vijay Pandit January 21, 2023 at 6:57 AM So true. Much appreciate your kind remarks, SuZ. Many thanks.

M. L. Kiser January 20, 2023 at 1:02 PM Wonderfully expressed beauty of the winter snows; you make me want to make now angels on the mountains. Vijay Pandit January 21, 2023 at 6:56 AM Much appreciate MLK. Many thanks.

Charles Messina January 19, 2023 at 3:30 AM Great imagery and write, Vijay. Lovely! Best wishes in the contest. Vijay Pandit January 19, 2023 at 1:44 PM Much appreciate, Charlie--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel January 18, 2023 at 10:40 PM I can sense winter through your words, Vijay:) masterfully penned:) Vijay Pandit January 19, 2023 at 1:43 PM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Michael Tor January 18, 2023 at 11:38 AM You paint a cold and freezing landscape we can see feel and relate to so well Vijay. Your words relay that message perfectly. Thank you for sharing my friend... Vijay Pandit January 19, 2023 at 1:43 PM Many thanks Michael for visiting and commenting. Always appreciate your presence on my page.

Deb M January 18, 2023 at 6:33 AM Your descriptive ability in your poems is perfect Vijay…always spot on! Beautiful sweet poem. Loved it! Debx Vijay Pandit January 19, 2023 at 1:42 PM So nice to hear. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Deb. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2023 at 5:54 AM - You described "my landscape" lovely, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Vijay Pandit January 19, 2023 at 1:41 PM Your part of the world is so, so beautiful. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Anne-Lise. Many thanks.

Joseph P. DiMino January 17, 2023 at 3:39 PM Lovely, descriptive poetry. Not easy to write so well. Splendid job! Thank you for sharing your enchantment, Vijay! Vijay Pandit January 18, 2023 at 4:48 AM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Joe. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands January 17, 2023 at 3:00 PM I love your poems and look forward to reading them. This is beautiful Vijay. A Fave for me :) Vijay Pandit January 18, 2023 at 4:48 AM So nice to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your supportive comments, as always. Many thanks for your kind remarks and your FAVE.

Jennifer Proxenos January 17, 2023 at 11:46 AM Beautiful poem Vijay and i particularly like the last two lines of your last verse but your very last line I have to fave. HUGS AND BLESSINGS Jennifer. Vijay Pandit January 18, 2023 at 4:46 AM So very kind of you, Jennifer. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2023 at 8:00 AM I can see it and feel it…of course my feet are cold so not a big stretch! Rivers freeze, struggle to flow…mountaintops adorn glacial glow! <3 Vijay Pandit January 18, 2023 at 4:46 AM Thank you Kim for your visit and comments. Much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy January 17, 2023 at 6:41 AM A vividly descriptive, expressive piece, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit January 17, 2023 at 7:21 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Joseph May January 17, 2023 at 5:19 AM Very nicely penned Vijay, best wishes Vijay Pandit January 17, 2023 at 6:23 AM Thank you Joseph--appreciate your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2023 at 2:19 PM very nicely rhymed and metered. So pretty. Vijay Pandit January 17, 2023 at 6:23 AM Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.

Mike Gentile January 16, 2023 at 6:18 AM Vijay, with your wonderful gift of crafting imagery, you've perfectly captured the season's essence! I'm chilly just reading it!! Happy Sunday ! Vijay Pandit January 16, 2023 at 1:47 PM So very kind of you, Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Valsa George January 16, 2023 at 4:18 AM As always, your lines send out a special glow. Beautiful penning, dear friend. All the best in the contest... Vijay Pandit January 16, 2023 at 1:47 PM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Valsa. Many thanks for stopping by my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose January 15, 2023 at 5:54 PM Your words of winter are all aglow, gl in the contest Vijay, :) Vijay Pandit January 16, 2023 at 1:46 PM Many thanks, Vienna. Much appreciate you stopping by with your kind remarks.

Sara Kendrick January 15, 2023 at 6:18 AM Very expressive and creative lines describing winter's chill and damage. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara Vijay Pandit January 16, 2023 at 1:45 PM Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Sara. Many thanks for stopping by with your kind remarks.

Victor Buhagiar January 15, 2023 at 1:31 AM Pity I have never seen the snow falling gently. You paint a delightful scene. Vijay Pandit January 16, 2023 at 1:44 PM Wishing one day you get to do that, Victor. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

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