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SEASON

EXPERIMENTAL 2x3 KUHLMANN ----------------------------------- In Autumn: Fall, Fog, Cold : Old age

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/8/2025 9:11:00 PM

Your lovely, well composed poem vividly contrasts the fall season with old age, in breathtaking fashion, Thriveni! Best wishes.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/8/2025 10:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words dear poet. Means so much to me. Thank you for the blessings.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/4/2025 6:44:00 AM

Wonderful! So much poetic punch in just a few words. Best wishes.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/4/2025 7:46:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Learnt this new form, from and for poet Brian Strand's blog contests. Thank you for the best wishes. Means so much to me.

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/3/2025 9:04:00 AM

Stay youthful, Thriveni, this makes for an interesting form, 2x3 as in words I assume. GL in the contest!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/4/2025 7:43:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. Yes it is an interesting form, Poet Brian Strand's blog contests. Hope you are doing great dear poet. thank you for the wishes. Blessings.

Valsa George

Date: 2/2/2025 8:39:00 PM

Dear Thriveni, your poem is crisp and terse! Old age is our autumn. Like the yellowing leaf, we too tenaciously cling on to life, fearing when will violent winds come to shake us from our foundations. Well done.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/3/2025 12:37:00 AM

I agree dear poet. 'fear' Many hurdles of old age. I learnt this new form for poet Brian Strand's blog contest. thank you for your kind visit dear friend.

Lin Lane

Date: 2/1/2025 12:47:00 PM

Old age is not conducive to nature's harsh elements, are they? I'm discovering the truth in that. Is this a new form, Thriveni?

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/1/2025 6:11:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I agree with you, the truth of old age is harsh. This form, I learnt and wrote for poet Brian Strand's blog challenge. Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2025 8:45:00 AM

I like it. I wonder if I am in the early fall or late!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/1/2025 6:08:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. well, on the spring side of fall will be fine perhaps? I appreciate your humor dear poet.

John Read

Date: 2/1/2025 2:22:00 AM

Hi thriveni, it just about sums up how I'm feeling.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/1/2025 6:51:00 AM

Ha, dear poet I love your humor. Blessed are those who converse with you daily! about the feeling? #metoo, prone to falls, blurring vision and cold shoulders LOL. Thank you for your kind visit.