Seaside Turns

unique metaphorical lines...especially liked sand even steps through lost water

Sweetie, all you do is improve and then improve again. It would have been a world tragedy if you'd quit your pen. LOVE this.

great imagery, like a declaration, indeed

Paige, It's as though one can give you word's such as salt shaker, & you can unfold something so unique & metaphorically mystic. Mystic Paige's! (pages) play on words. Sighs

Great images and symbolism, Paige. I really like poems related to sea and shore

Wow! I’m impressed that you wrote this form! I can’t do much more than rhyme! Great job!

Beautiful introspection combining sea elements with body elements : powerfully depicted, PH. I love interweaving of heart with water & waves ~ it brings forth healing power of both ; form used is effective since it is mathematical so balances right & left hémisphères of brain when reading. This is a clever device to use by a poet. Excellent last three lines identifying character of writer ~ Love it. Powerful title that could be variously interpreted. Hav super winter’s day, Hun.