Notes About The Poem

Macushla is an Irish word meaning "darling"

 

(Fictional)

 

 

Seaside Musings


Lost in the depth of his pearlescent black eyes 
shining brilliantly 
     (Just for me)
Those almost-crimped wrinkles intensify his smile
ev'n as the sea breeze ruffles his hair 
     (I can only stare)
The thrum of my heartbeat can be heard 
above the howling of the sea
at eventide 
     (We stand side by side)
Holding hands, we breathe in the salty tang silently
me and my macushla
     (Handsome fella)
My feral flummoxed feelings of before have fled 
now I am content with joy
My heart overflows
     (I think it shows)
He winks at me knowingly 
and I find myself falling plumb in love 

       with my husband once again.




03.18.2021



For John Hamilton's "Eight word Bardenesque challenge" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 4/19/2021 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write and picture. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 4/18/2021 7:19:00 PM
A wonderful win... Congrats and God bless you again. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/18/2021 4:27:00 PM
Thanks for this excellent entry, congrats Jo on a great 2nd place finish, simply amazing!
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Date: 3/18/2021 6:38:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic, Jo! I especially like how you ended it. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/18/2021 5:41:00 AM
Brilliant and beautiful. Love this. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 3/18/2021 5:13:00 AM
I like the way you wrote this--it flows in Greg's style. A sure win for you, Jo.
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Date: 3/18/2021 2:59:00 AM
You rose to the challenge well Jo and ive learnt a new word. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 3/18/2021 1:13:00 AM
This is a gorgeous entry and I'm sure it will rate high. Best for a win.
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