Seaside Melody

Ebony and ivory, two birds enraptured in a seaside melody.

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2016 2:49:00 PM

The composition of a seaside melody makes for a most lovely monoku, Joseph! Congratulations on this lovely win! // paul

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/30/2016 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/29/2016 3:36:00 PM

Awesome write and win Joe. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/29/2016 3:31:00 AM

Brilliant take Joseph.. congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 12:43:00 PM

haha. MJ came up in the captcha.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 12:42:00 PM

I had the MJ song pass through my mind as well. But you made it even cooler rhyming with melody!!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/27/2016 12:05:00 PM

Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/27/2016 8:57:00 AM

Great monoku!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2016 12:01:00 AM

Joseph, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2016 3:39:00 PM

I was thinking of going the ebony and ivory route as well!! This is GREAT!!