Seashell Memories - a Constanza

Conches scattered in shifting sands,
Ocean's painted art from high tide,
Caring not of past life inside.

Lovingly cupped in tiny hands,
A child of six years finds great joy.
Dirty hands bother not, this boy.

He lifts one to ear where he stands.
His bare toes dug in dampened silt,
Near sandcastle that he just built.

Dancing to sounds of seashell bands,
He squeals shear delight at the tune.
A sight that makes his mother swoon.

Ocean music, he understands.
He remembers time on Dad's ship.
Dancing stops and a tear does slip.

Conches scattered in shifting sands,
Lovingly cupped in tiny hands.
He lifts one to ear where he stands.
Dances to sounds of seashell bands.
Ocean music, he understands.



Written 11/25/17 for 
Craig Cornish/Constanza Contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/1/2017 9:54:00 PM
A Constanza it is...well done my friend...best of luck...this contest is going to be a toughie...god bless....and welcome to the Soup Rhoda...do not worry about what people say or do...just have fun...^WW^
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/1/2017 10:16:00 PM
Thank you. I've been reading other constanzas here and am blown away by the talent so I'm not holding my breath for a win in the contest. lol.
Date: 11/30/2017 1:20:00 PM
This is a beautifully painted picture, Rhoda, I hope it does well in the contest. // Barry
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 11/30/2017 4:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, Barry.
Date: 11/28/2017 9:20:00 AM
What a beautiful poem Rhoda you should do well with this. Good luck in the contest.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 11/28/2017 12:40:00 PM
Thanks, Edward. I've been entering many and hoping for just one, lol.
Date: 11/25/2017 1:57:00 PM
You have tackled this form with a capable pen, Rhoda! I like the subject matter and the way you presented it, especially the contrast between the first 3 stanzas and the final ones. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/25/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. I'm humbled by your kindness. It is my first ever Constanza. It's a challenging form, but fun to write.
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