Seascape

A fresh sun dawning Upon the white washed seashore Glistens hope once more

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2010 2:39:00 PM

Nice haiku.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/10/2010 8:58:00 AM

A beautifulful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/25/2010 8:00:00 AM

Love this one! It's a wonderful Haiku Kimberly. Thanks for visiting and leaving such wonderful comments. My regards and huge smiles! :))

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/21/2010 2:17:00 PM

Hi Kimberly, thank you for you kind comments! Today I visied a Cats' Exhibit with some rare breeds e.g. a Sibirian Forest Cat and Bengal Cats. Was nice, really and then I walked around the Mandau River in heavy snowfall.. Shot some pics which I will sent to my facebook album. Have a nice week ahead...Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/20/2010 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your success with this picturesque haiku, Kimberly! Very nice haiku and well deserving of the recognition. Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/16/2010 3:10:00 PM

congratulations Kimberly on nice Haiku!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations Kimberly, on your success in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative haiku. Nature does inspire hope...and joy. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2010 5:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Kimberly. Love,Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 8:13:00 PM

Hey Kimberly! My congratulations on your win in Raul's "Seascapes" Contest! Great work....Thanks for your always kind comments on my poems. Peace, love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2010 3:09:00 PM

Congrats Kimberly on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/15/2010 2:23:00 PM

Kimberly, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Daver Austin

Date: 2/15/2010 7:31:00 AM

I especially like the last line...adds luster. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2010 7:54:00 PM

Beautiful, Kimberly!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/14/2010 7:18:00 PM

poetically clean and fresh. Uplifting, Kimberly!-Robert. Bon chance, mon amie.-Robert

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/14/2010 6:39:00 PM

A very well written Haiku, Kimberly! Hope is good. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine today. Best wishes, Caroline.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/14/2010 3:29:00 PM

Beautiful ..a gem..Charma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 11:47:00 AM

great write, good luck!!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/14/2010 4:34:00 AM

You caught my memories perfectly in this Haiku, Kimberly! I have lived not far from white washed seashores and now I miss this picture..Tank you for your comments...Gert

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/13/2010 11:35:00 PM

such a beautiful vision you have painted with your words,,,,I wish you Good Luck in the contest,,wonderfully penned,,,Thank You for your words that you left behind after reading mine,,,Blessings..Cecil

Linda Witt-King

Date: 2/13/2010 11:24:00 PM

Lovely Kimberly. I'm discovering the power and freshness of the Haiku form, how the first two lines turn the gaze inward, revealing creation's reflection into consciousness.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 12:29:00 PM

An amazing Haiku for the new Seascapes contest ...good luck Kimberly.. my entry is Serenity... such a beautiful photo to glean words ... u have done it well.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/13/2010 9:46:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry here at PoetrySoup. I have enjoyed reading it today. Hoping you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Kimberly. Best wishes in Raul's contest should you enter this one in it. Love, Carol