Seascape

Warmth from the sun at mid-day Wave after wave from the sea Sand in the wind and salt spray Weather shaped rocks of beauty

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Date: 5/30/2009 12:52:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this, very nice flow and rhythm to it and very nice imagery too :)

Date: 5/1/2009 1:21:00 AM

Amazing sculpture by the waves Jim.& all for free.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 4/30/2009 7:11:00 PM

Wonderful picture you painted I'd like to be there now! Laura :)

Date: 4/30/2009 10:27:00 AM

Jim. I love the ocean..this took me there. Thank you! BG

Date: 4/30/2009 10:23:00 AM

You make me homesick for the sea, outstanding write. Blessings my friend. Ron

Date: 4/30/2009 9:36:00 AM

I love the title! A magnificent sight to see and can hear those waves crashing from the page as I read this remarkable quatrain.

Date: 4/30/2009 8:45:00 AM

This is beautiful throughout..each line contains a gem..well done.

Date: 4/30/2009 8:43:00 AM

Beautiful.