Seascape

Warmth from the sun at mid-day
Wave after wave from the sea
Sand in the wind and salt spray
Weather shaped rocks of beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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K. Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 12:52 AM
I enjoyed reading this, very nice flow and rhythm to it and very nice imagery too :)
Strand Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 1:21 AM
Amazing sculpture by the waves Jim.& all for free.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Mckenzie Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 7:11 PM
Wonderful picture you painted I'd like to be there now! Laura :)
Gorelick Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Jim. I love the ocean..this took me there. Thank you! BG
Bingham Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 10:23 AM
You make me homesick for the sea, outstanding write. Blessings my friend. Ron
Bird Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 9:36 AM
I love the title! A magnificent sight to see and can hear those waves crashing from the page as I read this remarkable quatrain.
Higgins Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 8:45 AM
This is beautiful throughout..each line contains a gem..well done.
Kroeger Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 8:43 AM
Beautiful.
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