Searching the Stars

O, Mystery Spirit of the night
That offers such quiet tonight
By the light of your stars, bring calm.

O, Mother Spirit of the moon 
That wipes away sorrowful mood
By your shimmering light, take it away soon.

O, Jupiter, Spirit Power of the Milky Way 
Let these angry ghosts be swallowed whole
To no return into the night's black holes.

O,  Venus, Spirit Beauty of everlasting love
Open our hearts to the true love from above
By the warmth of your light, teach us how.

O, Father spirit of the Universe
You inspire us with the quiet of the night
The mystery of stars that bring calm, 
The peace of the moon that heals
The strength of Jupiter that helps us through
The grace of Venus that helps us love again.

O, Mystery Spirit of the night
That offers such quiet at night
Just by the light of your stars,
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

By CarolineCécile, June 15, 2009.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 10:46 AM
Very authoritative of the subject, very skillful with the words, wonderfully artistic is the outcome, ... a good poem, well done!
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February 6, 2010 at 10:13 AM
An awesome feature Caroline. Congratulations a worthy contribution to soup. Sincerely, Moses
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February 4, 2010 at 7:21 PM
Congrats Caroline on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful choice for a wonderful write.. luv.. and thankxxx for your always special comments on my poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 4, 2010 at 5:47 PM
Congrats on the featuring of "Searching The Stars", Caroline. Vince
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February 2, 2010 at 9:17 PM
Caroline, I love the way you sum up your poem in your fifth stanza making this a unique form of your own. This is a real work of art. Congratulations on having it featured. It is very deserving. Had it not been featured I would have missed it, being new here. Aloha, Connie
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February 2, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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February 2, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Hey Caroline, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup! Peace and love, Audrey
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February 2, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Congrats on this star-gazer being selected. Love, daver
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February 1, 2010 at 4:21 PM
What a beautiful and spiritual write here, Caroline! How often have I stood "searching the stars" and you've captured all the spirits that are there for me to tune in to ... smile ... excellent selection to be featured this week here at PoetrySoup!! Congratulations!
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February 1, 2010 at 1:21 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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February 1, 2010 at 10:53 AM
There is a mystical feel about this lovely poem! Congratulations on this featured work, Caroline ! ~ Carrie
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February 1, 2010 at 5:24 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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February 1, 2010 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Caroline. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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February 1, 2010 at 3:01 AM
Really enjoyed my trip around the universe , well done and continue n the journey, you will not be alone. Daniel
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January 31, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Caroline.Rgds Brian
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January 31, 2010 at 5:39 PM
What an uplifting poem. You have me smiling. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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August 22, 2009 at 6:48 PM
Caroline, You have written on a subject close to my heart. God and the Universe. We are so loved by Him. Just look around and see all that He has made for us. BIG SMILE! Lovingly, Dane
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August 22, 2009 at 10:12 AM
An out of this world write, Take me to the heavens, and i'll take you to the stars. Together me to the milky way, via Jupiter and Mars>> a delight to read Caroline>>James
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