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Searching the Stars

O, Mystery Spirit of the night That offers such quiet tonight By the light of your stars, bring calm. O, Mother Spirit of the moon That wipes away sorrowful mood By your shimmering light, take it away soon. O, Jupiter, Spirit Power of the Milky Way Let these angry ghosts be swallowed whole To no return into the night's black holes. O, Venus, Spirit Beauty of everlasting love Open our hearts to the true love from above By the warmth of your light, teach us how. O, Father spirit of the Universe You inspire us with the quiet of the night The mystery of stars that bring calm, The peace of the moon that heals The strength of Jupiter that helps us through The grace of Venus that helps us love again. O, Mystery Spirit of the night That offers such quiet at night Just by the light of your stars, Thank you from the bottom of my heart. By CarolineCécile, June 15, 2009.

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Date: 2/7/2010 10:46:00 AM
Very authoritative of the subject, very skillful with the words, wonderfully artistic is the outcome, ... a good poem, well done!
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Date: 2/6/2010 10:13:00 AM
An awesome feature Caroline. Congratulations a worthy contribution to soup. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/4/2010 7:21:00 PM
Congrats Caroline on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful choice for a wonderful write.. luv.. and thankxxx for your always special comments on my poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/4/2010 5:47:00 PM
Congrats on the featuring of "Searching The Stars", Caroline. Vince
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:17:00 PM
Caroline, I love the way you sum up your poem in your fifth stanza making this a unique form of your own. This is a real work of art. Congratulations on having it featured. It is very deserving. Had it not been featured I would have missed it, being new here. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:08:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:31:00 AM
Hey Caroline, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/2/2010 6:03:00 AM
Congrats on this star-gazer being selected. Love, daver
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:21:00 PM
What a beautiful and spiritual write here, Caroline! How often have I stood "searching the stars" and you've captured all the spirits that are there for me to tune in to ... smile ... excellent selection to be featured this week here at PoetrySoup!! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:21:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:53:00 AM
There is a mystical feel about this lovely poem! Congratulations on this featured work, Caroline ! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:24:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Caroline. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:01:00 AM
Really enjoyed my trip around the universe , well done and continue n the journey, you will not be alone. Daniel
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Date: 1/31/2010 11:45:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Caroline.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/31/2010 5:39:00 PM
What an uplifting poem. You have me smiling. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/22/2009 6:48:00 PM
Caroline, You have written on a subject close to my heart. God and the Universe. We are so loved by Him. Just look around and see all that He has made for us. BIG SMILE! Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/22/2009 10:12:00 AM
An out of this world write, Take me to the heavens, and i'll take you to the stars. Together me to the milky way, via Jupiter and Mars>> a delight to read Caroline>>James
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