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As I lay in this sea of Disease filled, murky, and Much too familiar water substance, It seems to be so still and foul, I can’t help but to dwell if I will Ever rise above this some what Self- inflicted hell, this place Where sanity is nowhere to be found Where are you my sturdy ground Will I get to you before the ship Of soul-less souls makes another round I need you to save me before I Drown

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Date: 5/30/2010 6:52:00 AM
This poem appeals to the sense of sight and smell. I like the descriptiveness. Stay afloat! Great job and keep writing. Joseph
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