Searching

As I lay in this sea of
Disease filled, murky, and
Much too familiar water substance,
It seems to be so still and foul,
I can’t help but to dwell if I will
Ever rise above this some what
Self- inflicted hell, this place
Where sanity is nowhere to be found
Where are you my sturdy ground
Will I get to you before the ship
Of soul-less souls makes another round
I need you to save me before I
Drown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 30, 2010 at 6:52 AM
This poem appeals to the sense of sight and smell. I like the descriptiveness. Stay afloat! Great job and keep writing. Joseph
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