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sand dunes stretch endless eyes search far in hopefulness~ ` oasis to spot

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/1/2022 10:48:00 AM

You describe such desperation so amazingly in this Haiku - well penned - hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/28/2022 8:27:00 PM

You think they sell camels at that oasis? -- Camel cigarettes? lol. Nice ku, Valsa.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/28/2022 5:28:00 PM

If one can break through a mirage, a refuge might be found on the other side. A fine piece about unyielding hopefulness Valsa!

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/28/2022 4:03:00 PM

Valsa, hope advents a need or no oasis, truly, the striving inspires my friend, Aloha~William

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/28/2022 3:56:00 PM

Very evocative! You painted a picture of endless quest. Excellent haiku!! A fav for me!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/28/2022 11:25:00 AM

i feel you have been to the Badlands - me too

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/28/2022 10:23:00 AM

A mirage is the dominant scene these days! Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/28/2022 10:00:00 AM

Drought has persisted around the world, and the effects of global warming are being felt, but we continue to hope for an oasis to relieve our suffering. Blessings

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/28/2022 7:51:00 AM

The eyes are hopeful…they know oasis’ do exist!