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Seagull’s Song

sky slides into sea
white dots of seagulls beauty
singing storm coming

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Michael Tor

Date: 3/7/2025 4:54:00 PM

I can hear them Karen love the sounds of Seagulls I love feeding them. Lovely poem my Dear. Hugs...

Karen Jones
Date: 3/7/2025 4:59:00 PM

Thanks dear poet!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/4/2025 8:16:00 PM

So beautiful, Karen. The imagery is arresting! Very best wishes.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/4/2025 8:32:00 PM

You are kind! Thank you Evelyn!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/3/2025 9:37:00 AM

This is such a lovely visual and a wonderful haiku Karen. Enjoyed.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/4/2025 1:25:00 AM

Thanks Nancy!

Valsa George

Date: 2/28/2025 3:37:00 AM

Wow, a beautiful scene....! I can clearly visualize the seagulls as dots in the sky. Great haiku, dear Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/28/2025 5:06:00 AM

Thanks Valsa!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/27/2025 1:53:00 PM

Very good haiku, Karen! Janice

Karen Jones
Date: 2/27/2025 2:59:00 PM

Glad you like it and thanks for reading Janice!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/26/2025 3:39:00 PM

I love this. I can picture the seagulls coming to roost during a storm. If a person has only been to the seashore once, he will remember the seagulls.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/26/2025 3:54:00 PM

True! Thanks for the love Hilda!

Maria Williams

Date: 2/26/2025 4:02:00 AM

Dear Karen I love Haikus and yours is exceptionally beautiful in its imagery. Love and Hugs

Karen Jones
Date: 2/26/2025 4:41:00 AM

Wow! What a kind comment Maria! Thanks for liking you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/25/2025 8:18:00 PM

I'm with Terry Flood below, Karen... And by the way, why do seagulls never fly over the bay? -- B/c then they'd be 'bay-gulls.' lol. (I can't believe I ate the 'hole thing!')

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 8:45:00 PM

lol I suppose the sea gulls prefer seafood lol

Terry Flood

Date: 2/25/2025 4:37:00 PM

I always thought seagulls screeching was just a racket. Now I must ponder the notion that they’re giving us a weather report ;-) Enjoyed this Karen. Note to self…”Heed the seagull!”

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 4:58:00 PM

lol animals have instincts we don’t pay attention to often. Glad you enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2025 9:14:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely write. I can see it. Wish I was there... Have a great time writing away.....................

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 4:54:00 PM

Thanks Paula!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/25/2025 5:55:00 AM

Dear Karen,What a stunning capture of nature’s simplicity and power. I just love the way you show the sky, sea, and the seagulls’ presence, which builds such a anticipation. It’s a quiet storm of beauty. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 7:23:00 AM

I appreciate your kind words Daniel! Blessings!

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 2/25/2025 5:29:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Karen. I can picture those noisy gulls letting us know.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Oliver!

Ink Empress

Date: 2/25/2025 3:36:00 AM

I love the alliterations and how youv painted imagery here , beautiful haiku really and theres always an seagull posing when i take pictures of sunsets everyday! Pleasure reading your work: you are so good at haikus. Would love to read more from you dear Karen

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 5:13:00 AM

I just realized I forgot the form it should be lowercase! Ooops! Will correct. Thanks

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/25/2025 2:24:00 AM

You live nearby a sea? lovely write dear friend. happy singing.

Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2025 5:12:00 AM

The sea is 4 hours away so no. lol But we visit and thanks!