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a page of my diary penned in blues crimped fold over fold crafted into an origami boat set afloat to drift free dreams and aspirations captured in yearning poured out and launched seafaring under a starry vault desperate plea to the winds of fate AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on May 13, 2020 to contest SHUTTER SPEED sponsored by KAI MICHAEL NEUMANN - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 5/29/2020 9:12:00 PM
Paper boats carry beautiful dreams of sailing through life. Congrats.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely comment, Mohan.
Date: 5/25/2020 12:38:00 AM
This created such a dreamlike state for me. Simply beautiful, Lynn. Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2020 4:23:00 AM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Elaine.
Date: 5/24/2020 5:41:00 AM
This is incredibly beautiful Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/24/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren.
Date: 5/13/2020 7:28:00 AM
great metaphor... love this one Line...wonderful write! hugs
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Date: 5/13/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely compliment, Sandra.