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Sea Woes

I chartered a boat for sea fishing Those waves just kept swelling and swishing But when the boat stopped My stomach had flopped To be back on land I was wishing To go swim in the sea is so sweet Though I swim like I'm made of concrete That white sand's so near There's nothing to fear Except jellyfish stinging my feet August 4, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/5/2019 3:58:00 PM
LOVE your new one at the bottom!!!
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Randy Steele
Date: 8/5/2019 4:37:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/4/2019 7:25:00 PM
these are cute ones for the sea contest. I especially liked the first one. your limerick meter is very good.
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Randy Steele
Date: 8/5/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. See Soup Mail.